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From: Petr Machata <petrm@nvidia.com>
To: Daniel Machon <daniel.machon@microchip.com>
Cc: <netdev@vger.kernel.org>, <dsahern@kernel.org>,
	<stephen@networkplumber.org>, <petrm@nvidia.com>,
	<UNGLinuxDriver@microchip.com>
Subject: Re: [PATCH iproute2-next 9/9] man: dcb-app: clean up a few mistakes
Date: Tue, 23 May 2023 18:49:17 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87zg5v3s32.fsf@nvidia.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20230510-dcb-rewr-v1-9-83adc1f93356@microchip.com>


Daniel Machon <daniel.machon@microchip.com> writes:

> While referencing the dcb-app manpage, I spotted a few mistakes. Lets
> fix them.
>
> Signed-off-by: Daniel Machon <daniel.machon@microchip.com>
> ---
>  man/man8/dcb-app.8 | 10 +++++-----
>  1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/man/man8/dcb-app.8 b/man/man8/dcb-app.8
> index ecb38591168e..ebec67c90801 100644
> --- a/man/man8/dcb-app.8
> +++ b/man/man8/dcb-app.8
> @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
> -.TH DCB-ETS 8 "6 December 2020" "iproute2" "Linux"
> +.TH DCB-APP 8 "6 December 2020" "iproute2" "Linux"
>  .SH NAME
>  dcb-app \- show / manipulate application priority table of
>  the DCB (Data Center Bridging) subsystem
> @@ -26,7 +26,7 @@ the DCB (Data Center Bridging) subsystem
>  .RB "[ " pcp-prio " ]"
>  
>  .ti -8
> -.B dcb ets " { " add " | " del " | " replace " } " dev
> +.B dcb app " { " add " | " del " | " replace " } " dev
>  .RI DEV
>  .RB "[ " default-prio " " \fIPRIO-LIST\fB " ]"
>  .RB "[ " ethtype-prio " " \fIET-MAP\fB " ]"
> @@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ individual APP 3-tuples through
>  .B add
>  and
>  .B del
> -commands. On the other other hand, the command
> +commands. On the other hand, the command

Heh, neat typo.

>  .B replace
>  does what one would typically want in this situation--first adds the new
>  configuration, and then removes the obsolete one, so that only one
> @@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ for details. Keys are DSCP points, values are priorities assigned to
>  traffic with matching DSCP. DSCP points can be written either directly as
>  numeric values, or using symbolic names specified in
>  .B /etc/iproute2/rt_dsfield
> -(however note that that file specifies full 8-bit dsfield values, whereas
> +(however note that file specifies full 8-bit dsfield values, whereas

Nope, this one's correct. The first that is a conjunction, the second
one... a pronoun? Not sure.

Maybe make it "note that the file"? It's clear what file we are talking
about and the grating "that that" goes away. Pretty sure it's a
stylistic faux pas.

>  .B dcb app
>  will only use the higher six bits).
>  .B dcb app show
> @@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ priority 4:
>  .P
>  # dcb app replace dev eth0 dscp-prio 24:4
>  .br
> -# dcb app show dev eth0 dscp-prio
> +# dcb app -N show dev eth0 dscp-prio
>  .br
>  dscp-prio 0:0 24:4 48:6


  reply	other threads:[~2023-05-23 16:56 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 25+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-05-22 18:41 [PATCH iproute2-next 0/9] Introduce new dcb-rewr subcommand Daniel Machon
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 1/9] dcb: app: expose dcb-app functions in new header Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 11:18   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-24  6:39     ` Daniel.Machon
2023-05-24  9:28       ` Petr Machata
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 2/9] dcb: app: add new dcbnl attribute field Daniel Machon
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 3/9] dcb: app: modify dcb-app print functions for dcb-rewr reuse Daniel Machon
2023-05-22 21:33   ` Stephen Hemminger
2023-05-25  7:20     ` Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 13:23   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-24  6:47     ` Daniel.Machon
2023-05-24  9:37       ` Petr Machata
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 4/9] dcb: app: modify dcb_app_table_remove_replaced() " Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 14:42   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 5/9] dcb: app: modify dcb_app_parse_mapping_cb " Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 16:29   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 6/9] dcb: rewr: add new dcb-rewr subcommand Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 16:35   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-24  6:51     ` Daniel.Machon
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 7/9] man: dcb-rewr: add new manpage for dcb-rewr Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 16:56   ` Petr Machata
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 8/9] man: dcb: add additional references under 'SEE ALSO' Daniel Machon
2023-05-22 18:41 ` [PATCH iproute2-next 9/9] man: dcb-app: clean up a few mistakes Daniel Machon
2023-05-23 16:49   ` Petr Machata [this message]
2023-05-24  6:56     ` Daniel.Machon

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