From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from sirius.lasnet.de ([78.47.116.19]) by linuxtogo.org with esmtp (Exim 4.69) (envelope-from ) id 1OHHq2-0005db-08 for openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org; Wed, 26 May 2010 16:44:40 +0200 Received: from p5b035a88.dip.t-dialin.net ([91.3.90.136] helo=excalibur) by sirius.lasnet.de with esmtpsa (Cipher TLS-1.0:RSA_AES_256_CBC_SHA1:32) (Exim 4.63 #1) id 1OHHm1-00075v-Pu by authid with cram_md5 for ; Wed, 26 May 2010 16:40:00 +0200 Received: from stefan by excalibur with local (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1OHAQ9-0007QT-Uq for openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org; Wed, 26 May 2010 08:48:53 +0200 Date: Wed, 26 May 2010 08:48:53 +0200 From: Stefan Schmidt To: openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org Message-ID: <20100526064853.GF22917@excalibur.local> References: <1274854676-5931-1-git-send-email-koen@openembedded.org> <1274854676-5931-2-git-send-email-koen@openembedded.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <1274854676-5931-2-git-send-email-koen@openembedded.org> X-Mailer: Mutt http://www.mutt.org/ X-KeyID: 0xDDF51665 X-Website: http://www.datenfreihafen.org/ User-Agent: Mutt/1.5.20 (2009-06-14) X-SA-Exim-Connect-IP: 78.47.116.19 X-SA-Exim-Mail-From: stefan@datenfreihafen.org X-Spam-Checker-Version: SpamAssassin 3.2.5 (2008-06-10) on discovery X-Spam-Level: X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.0 required=5.0 tests=AWL,BAYES_00, DATE_IN_PAST_06_12 autolearn=no version=3.2.5 X-SA-Exim-Version: 4.2.1 (built Wed, 25 Jun 2008 17:20:07 +0000) X-SA-Exim-Scanned: Yes (on linuxtogo.org) Subject: Re: [PATCH 2/7] Usermanual/comparing: Fix documentation errors X-BeenThere: openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.11 Precedence: list Reply-To: openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org List-Id: Using the OpenEmbedded metadata to build Distributions List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Wed, 26 May 2010 14:44:41 -0000 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline On Wed, 2010-05-26 at 08:17, Koen Kooi wrote: > From: Chase Maupin > > * Fixed up typos and other errors in the documentation. > > Signed-off-by: Chase Maupin > Signed-off-by: Koen Kooi Non-native speaker ack: Acked-by: Stefan Schmidt > --- > docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml | 18 +++++++++--------- > 1 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml b/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml > index 1347010..cfdaa95 100644 > --- a/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml > +++ b/docs/usermanual/chapters/comparing.xml > @@ -5,13 +5,13 @@ >
> buildroot > > - Writing of BitBake recipes is more easy > + Writing of BitBake recipes is easier > and more intuitive than writing Makefiles while providing higher > flexibility. This allows you to tweak specific recipes for your very > - special needs and to add new recipes very fast. You can build toolchains, > + special needs and to add new recipes quickly. You can build toolchains, > Software Distribution Kits (SDKs), complete Distributions or just single > - packages. The flexibility of OpenEmbedded allows you to reuse the once > - written recipes for many different purposes. OpenEmbedded provides > + packages. The flexibility of OpenEmbedded allows you to reuse recipes > + for many different purposes. OpenEmbedded provides > everything buildroot will be able to provide. But in contrast to buildroot > OpenEmbedded will allow you to achieve what you really want to achieve. > You can add new package formats, new filesystems, new output formats > @@ -21,11 +21,11 @@ >
> crosstool > > - Crosstool allows to create toolchains for you. It can only create > + Crosstool allows the creation of toolchains. It can only create > the initial toolchain for you. It will not compile other needed libraries > - or applications for you, it will not be able to track dependencies or to > + or applications for you, it will not be able to track dependencies or > package them properly. OpenEmbedded supports all configurations crosstool > - supports. You can start to create toolchains with OpenEmbedded, then as > + supports. You can start by creating toolchains with OpenEmbedded, then as > your needs grow create a more complete SDK from already present base > libraries and applications and if you recognize you need to have packages > for the target you have them almost built already. > @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ > cross-compiling is hard itself but many people misuse the buildsystem they > use to build their software. This will lead to a variety of issues you can > run into. This can be failing tests on configuration because of executing > - cross compiled binaries or crashes at run-time due wrong sizes of basic > + cross compiled binaries or crashes at run-time due to wrong sizes of basic > types. When utilizing OpenEmbedded you avoid searching for patches at many > different places and will be able to get things done more quickly. > OpenEmbedded allows you to choose from a pool > @@ -48,4 +48,4 @@ > output formats and filesystems. This allows you to create complete and > specialized distributions easily. >
> - > \ No newline at end of file > + > -- > 1.7.0 > > > _______________________________________________ > Openembedded-devel mailing list > Openembedded-devel@lists.openembedded.org > http://lists.linuxtogo.org/cgi-bin/mailman/listinfo/openembedded-devel