From: "Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
To: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
Cc: dhowells@redhat.com, perfbook@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 1/6] advsync: Fix trivial typos
Date: Sun, 3 Apr 2016 06:56:54 -0700 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20160403135654.GA5835@linux.vnet.ibm.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1459556911-11538-2-git-send-email-sj38.park@gmail.com>
On Sat, Apr 02, 2016 at 09:28:26AM +0900, SeongJae Park wrote:
> This commit fixes trivial typos under `advsync/` directory.
>
> Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
Queued, thank you!
Thanx, Paul
> ---
> advsync/advsync.tex | 4 ++--
> advsync/memorybarriers.tex | 4 ++--
> 2 files changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/advsync/advsync.tex b/advsync/advsync.tex
> index 7250e96..118dc74 100644
> --- a/advsync/advsync.tex
> +++ b/advsync/advsync.tex
> @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ gives a brief overview of non-blocking synchronization.
>
> Although locking is the workhorse of parallelism in production, in
> many situations performance, scalability, and real-time response can
> -all be greatly improved though use of lockless techniques.
> +all be greatly improved through use of lockless techniques.
> A particularly impressive example of such a lockless technique are
> the statistical counters describe in
> Section~\ref{sec:count:Statistical Counters},
> @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ Other examples we have covered include:
> Section~\ref{sec:SMPdesign:Resource Allocator Caches}.
> \item The maze solver in Section~\ref{sec:SMPdesign:Beyond Partitioning}.
> \item The data-ownership techniques described in
> - Section~\ref{chp:Data Ownership}.
> + Chapter~\ref{chp:Data Ownership}.
> \item The reference-counting and RCU techinques described in
> Chapter~\ref{chp:Deferred Processing}.
> \item The lookup code paths described in Chapter~\ref{chp:Data Structures}.
> diff --git a/advsync/memorybarriers.tex b/advsync/memorybarriers.tex
> index 99e074d..c668f3c 100644
> --- a/advsync/memorybarriers.tex
> +++ b/advsync/memorybarriers.tex
> @@ -759,7 +759,7 @@ these combinations in order to fully understand how this works.
> it is not possible for one of the loads to see the
> results of the other load.
> However, if we know that CPU~2's load from B returned a
> - newer value than CPU~1's load from B, the we also know
> + newer value than CPU~1's load from B, then we also know
> that CPU~2's load from A returned either the same value
> as CPU~1's load from A or some later value.
>
> @@ -1047,7 +1047,7 @@ a few simple rules:
> by the first CPU, then the second CPU's load from A must
> give the value stored by the first CPU.
> \item If one CPU does a load from A ordered before a store to B,
> - and if a second CPU does a load from B ordered before a store from A,
> + and if a second CPU does a load from B ordered before a store to A,
> and if the second CPU's load from B gives the value stored by
> the first CPU, then the first CPU's load from A must \emph{not}
> give the value stored by the second CPU.
> --
> 1.9.1
>
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2016-04-03 13:56 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 24+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2016-04-02 0:28 [PATCH 0/6] fix trivial problems in advanced synchronization chapter SeongJae Park
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 1/6] advsync: fix trivial typos SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:56 ` Paul E. McKenney [this message]
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 2/6] advsync: fix latex syntax related typos SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:52 ` Paul E. McKenney
2016-04-03 22:10 ` SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 22:25 ` [PATCH] " SeongJae Park
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 3/6] advsync: use latex reference feature consistently SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:37 ` Paul E. McKenney
2016-04-03 22:30 ` SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 22:33 ` [PATCH] " SeongJae Park
2016-04-07 21:05 ` Paul E. McKenney
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 4/6] advsync: fix wrong code example SeongJae Park
2016-04-02 2:39 ` Yokosawa Akira
2016-04-02 2:52 ` SeongJae Park
2016-04-02 3:03 ` [PATCH] " SeongJae Park
2016-04-02 3:09 ` Yokosawa Akira
2016-04-02 3:12 ` SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:57 ` [PATCH] advsync: Fix " Paul E. McKenney
2016-04-02 3:06 ` [PATCH 4/6] advsync: fix " Yokosawa Akira
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 5/6] advsync: fix critical section bleed-in description SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:57 ` [PATCH 5/6] advsync: Fix " Paul E. McKenney
2016-04-02 0:28 ` [PATCH 6/6] advsync: fix wrong reference to section ``MMIO write barrier'' SeongJae Park
2016-04-03 13:57 ` [PATCH 6/6] advsync: Fix " Paul E. McKenney
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