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From: "Paul E. McKenney" <paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com>
To: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] formal: Trivial typo fixes
Date: Tue, 19 Jul 2016 08:17:35 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20160719151735.GW7094@linux.vnet.ibm.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <6e78783e-7f09-931d-5981-ad11af4bd7b5@gmail.com>

On Wed, Jul 20, 2016 at 12:08:29AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> On 2016/07/19 23:42 +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> 
> Hi Paul,
> 
> These are typos I noticed while reading recently updated part in "formal/formal.tex".
> 
> >  	Furthermore, although the L4 microkernel is a large software
> >  	artifact from the viewpoint of formal verification, it is tiny
> > -	compared to the a great number of projects, including LLVM,
> > +	compared to a great number of projects, including LLVM,
> 
> Here, "the" and "a" are redundant. I removed "the", because I have no idea
> how many projects are there in this context.
> 
> >  	gcc, the Linux kernel, Hadoop, MongoDB, and a great many others.
> >  
> >  	Although formal verification is finally starting to show some
> > @@ -171,4 +171,4 @@ All else being equal, a simpler implementation is much better than
> >  a mechanical proof for a complex implementation!
> >  
> >  And the open challenge to those working on formal verification techniques
> > -and systems is prove this summary wrong!
> > +and systems is to prove this summary wrong!
> > 
> 
> This seems a trivial one.

Agreed on both, pulled and pushed.  And thank you for your careful
review and the fixes!

							Thanx, Paul


  reply	other threads:[~2016-07-19 15:17 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 4+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2016-07-19 14:42 [PATCH] formal: Trivial typo fixes Akira Yokosawa
2016-07-19 15:08 ` Akira Yokosawa
2016-07-19 15:17   ` Paul E. McKenney [this message]
2016-07-19 15:10 ` Paul E. McKenney

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