[PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

[PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

[Akira Yokosawa]

From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900
Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

Fixes: 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative")
Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
---
Paul,

This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is
"there are at most two threads involved". There should be
other word choices. It's up to you which one to use.

    Thanks, Akira
--
 memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex
index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644
--- a/memorder/memorder.tex
+++ b/memorder/memorder.tex
@@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure.
 Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in
 Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity}
 and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}.
-In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there
+In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there
 are at most two threads involved.

 \QuickQuiz{}
-- 
2.7.4

Re: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use

[Paul E. McKenney]

On Thu, Aug 31, 2017 at 12:12:46AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote:
> >From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
> From: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
> Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900
> Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use
> 
> Fixes: 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative")
> Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa <akiyks@gmail.com>
> ---
> Paul,
> 
> This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is
> "there are at most two threads involved". There should be
> other word choices. It's up to you which one to use.

Good catch, applied, thank you!

							Thanx, Paul

>     Thanks, Akira
> --
>  memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +-
>  1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
> 
> diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex
> index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644
> --- a/memorder/memorder.tex
> +++ b/memorder/memorder.tex
> @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure.
>  Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in
>  Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity}
>  and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}.
> -In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there
> +In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there
>  are at most two threads involved.
> 
>  \QuickQuiz{}
> -- 
> 2.7.4
> 

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