From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.156.1]:55320 "EHLO mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1750948AbdH3Qo0 (ORCPT ); Wed, 30 Aug 2017 12:44:26 -0400 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098393.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.21/8.16.0.21) with SMTP id v7UGhl3r105386 for ; Wed, 30 Aug 2017 12:44:26 -0400 Received: from e17.ny.us.ibm.com (e17.ny.us.ibm.com [129.33.205.207]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 2cnur1hx2n-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-SHA bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Wed, 30 Aug 2017 12:44:26 -0400 Received: from localhost by e17.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Wed, 30 Aug 2017 12:44:25 -0400 Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 09:44:21 -0700 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use Reply-To: paulmck@linux.vnet.ibm.com References: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: Message-Id: <20170830164421.GA11320@linux.vnet.ibm.com> Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: Content-Transfer-Encoding: Quoted-printable MIME-Version: 1.0 To: Akira Yokosawa Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Thu, Aug 31, 2017 at 12:12:46AM +0900, Akira Yokosawa wrote: > >From 453e325a5fbfc1de64cb51d200fe744bbb79016f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 > From: Akira Yokosawa > Date: Wed, 30 Aug 2017 23:55:37 +0900 > Subject: [PATCH] memorder: Fix conjunction use >=20 > Fixes: 06ca30969d19 ("memorder: Acquire operations are not cumulative") > Signed-off-by: Akira Yokosawa > --- > Paul, >=20 > This "unless" doesn't make sense as the following clause is > "there are at most two threads involved". There should be > other word choices. It's up to you which one to use. Good catch, applied, thank you! Thanx, Paul > Thanks, Akira > -- > memorder/memorder.tex | 2 +- > 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-) >=20 > diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex > index 3b4763e..78f2cc4 100644 > --- a/memorder/memorder.tex > +++ b/memorder/memorder.tex > @@ -518,7 +518,7 @@ failure. > Column ``C'' indicates cumulativity and propagation, as explained in > Sections~\ref{sec:memorder:Cumulativity} > and~\ref{sec:memorder:Propagation}. > -In the meantime, this column can always be ignored unless there > +In the meantime, this column can always be ignored when there > are at most two threads involved. >=20 > \QuickQuiz{} > --=20 > 2.7.4 >=20 -- To unsubscribe from this list: send the line "unsubscribe perfbook" in the body of a message to majordomo@vger.kernel.org More majordomo info at https://urldefense.proofpoint.com/v2/url?u=3Dhttp-3= A__vger.kernel.org_majordomo-2Dinfo.html&d=3DDwIBAg&c=3Djf_iaSHvJObTbx-siA1= ZOg&r=3Dux41CW3B5BSVxDMRNRWyLbUmPebZc70Kq4AkfdiRGMI&m=3DP-CUSqaCC4Mz9bsuPiE= KNEf8kcq8e0zMNmGrlO7ehb0&s=3Db6OIqlcQfcpwzpHhLzCOAxwU3XdI7i72kw461yi05pI&e= =3D=20