From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Return-Path: Received: from mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com ([148.163.156.1]:57114 "EHLO mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com" rhost-flags-OK-OK-OK-OK) by vger.kernel.org with ESMTP id S1729243AbeKLDX3 (ORCPT ); Sun, 11 Nov 2018 22:23:29 -0500 Received: from pps.filterd (m0098393.ppops.net [127.0.0.1]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com (8.16.0.22/8.16.0.22) with SMTP id wABHXuj2021771 for ; Sun, 11 Nov 2018 12:34:20 -0500 Received: from e12.ny.us.ibm.com (e12.ny.us.ibm.com [129.33.205.202]) by mx0a-001b2d01.pphosted.com with ESMTP id 2npde7xd3u-1 (version=TLSv1.2 cipher=AES256-GCM-SHA384 bits=256 verify=NOT) for ; Sun, 11 Nov 2018 12:34:20 -0500 Received: from localhost by e12.ny.us.ibm.com with IBM ESMTP SMTP Gateway: Authorized Use Only! Violators will be prosecuted for from ; Sun, 11 Nov 2018 17:34:19 -0000 Date: Sun, 11 Nov 2018 09:34:17 -0800 From: "Paul E. McKenney" Subject: Re: [PATCH] tooloftrade: add missing subject of sentence Reply-To: paulmck@linux.ibm.com References: <1541854198-4649-1-git-send-email-junchangwang@gmail.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=us-ascii Content-Disposition: inline In-Reply-To: <1541854198-4649-1-git-send-email-junchangwang@gmail.com> Message-Id: <20181111173417.GV4170@linux.ibm.com> Sender: perfbook-owner@vger.kernel.org List-ID: To: Junchang Wang Cc: perfbook@vger.kernel.org On Sat, Nov 10, 2018 at 08:49:58PM +0800, Junchang Wang wrote: > > Signed-off-by: Junchang Wang > --- > Hi Paul, > > This is the only patch for Chapter Tools of Trade. Please take a look. Good catch! I took this with Akira's suggested update as shown below, thank you both!!! Thanx, Paul ------------------------------------------------------------------------- commit 59d25618814ae5333e243f536f1295ff49a035ff Author: Junchang Wang Date: Sat Nov 10 20:49:58 2018 +0800 tooloftrade: add missing subject of sentence Signed-off-by: Junchang Wang Signed-off-by: Paul E. McKenney [ paulmck: Apply change suggested by Akira Yokosawa. ] diff --git a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex index 0844b4c74c05..20171872e906 100644 --- a/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex +++ b/toolsoftrade/toolsoftrade.tex @@ -2043,8 +2043,8 @@ machine-sized and properly aligned. It can also prevent load fusing, store fusing, invented loads, and invented stores. However, although it does prevent the compiler from reordering \co{volatile} -accesses with each other, does nothing to prevent the CPU from reordering -these accesses. +accesses with each other, it does nothing to prevent the +CPU from reordering these accesses. Furthermore, it does nothing to prevent either compiler or CPU from reordering non-\co{volatile} accesses with each other or with \co{volatile} accesses.