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From: SeongJae Park <sj@kernel.org>
To: paulmck@kernel.org
Cc: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>, perfbook@vger.kernel.org
Subject: [PATCH 01/10] memorder: Fix typos: s/,/./
Date: Sat, 23 Sep 2023 09:31:55 -0700	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20230923163204.14558-2-sj@kernel.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20230923163204.14558-1-sj@kernel.org>

From: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>

Two sentences in memorder.tex are having commas instead of ending
periods.  Fix those.

Signed-off-by: SeongJae Park <sj38.park@gmail.com>
---
 memorder/memorder.tex | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/memorder/memorder.tex b/memorder/memorder.tex
index 1c882ea4..75e336dc 100644
--- a/memorder/memorder.tex
+++ b/memorder/memorder.tex
@@ -4103,7 +4103,7 @@ The following list of rules summarizes the lessons of this section:
 
 \item	If both legs of the \qco{if} statement begin with identical stores
 	to the same variable, then the control dependency will not order
-	those stores,
+	those stores.
 	If ordering is needed, precede both of them with \co{smp_mb()} or
 	use \co{smp_store_release()}.
 	Please note that it is \emph{not} sufficient to use \co{barrier()}
@@ -4763,7 +4763,7 @@ Perhaps surprisingly, despite the empty critical section, RCU nevertheless
 still manages to forbid the cycle.
 This can again be checked using the \co{herd} tool.
 Furthermore, the reasoning is once again similar to that for
-\cref{lst:memorder:What Happens Before RCU Readers?},
+\cref{lst:memorder:What Happens Before RCU Readers?}.
 Recapping, if \co{P1()}'s \co{WRITE_ONCE()} follows the end of a given
 grace period, then \co{P1()}'s RCU read-side critical section---and
 everything following it---must follow the beginning of that same grace
-- 
2.17.1


  reply	other threads:[~2023-09-23 16:31 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 14+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-09-23 16:31 [PATCH 00/10] memorder: Trivial fixups SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:31 ` SeongJae Park [this message]
2023-09-23 16:31 ` [PATCH 02/10] memorder/memorder: Add a missing space between column name and 'column' SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:31 ` [PATCH 03/10] memorder: Add missing unbreakable spaces between 'values', 'and', and numbers SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:31 ` [PATCH 04/10] memorder: Remove an empty fcvref block SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:31 ` [PATCH 05/10] memorder: Remove braces for single line if-else blocks SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:32 ` [PATCH 06/10] memorder: Consistently use \co{} instead of {\tt } for code SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:32 ` [PATCH 07/10] memorder: Consistently use '\co{}' for 'herd' SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:32 ` [PATCH 08/10] memorder: Remove a redundant sentence for memory barrier strength SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:32 ` [PATCH 09/10] memorder: Make clear the scope of READ_ONCE()/WRITE_ONCE() heavy uses SeongJae Park
2023-09-23 16:32 ` [PATCH 10/10] memorder: Fix wrong primitive names in a quick quizz SeongJae Park
2023-09-24  0:02   ` Akira Yokosawa
2023-09-24 15:40     ` SeongJae Park
2023-09-24 14:57 ` [PATCH 00/10] memorder: Trivial fixups Paul E. McKenney

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