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* [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix description of the sentence
@ 2016-12-01  6:55 Zhang Chen
  2016-12-01 14:57 ` [Qemu-devel] [PATCH for-2.8] " Eric Blake
  0 siblings, 1 reply; 12+ messages in thread
From: Zhang Chen @ 2016-12-01  6:55 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: qemu devel, QEMU Trivial, Michael Tokarev, Laurent Vivier
  Cc: Zhang Chen, Eric Blake, Stefan Weil

Say it in another way to make it easier to understand.

Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>
Signed-off-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
---
 docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
index 76767cb..c4941de 100644
--- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt
+++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
@@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary.
 
 == Usage ==
 
-Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
+Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
+clearly describe the usage.
+
 Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
 -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
 -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66
-- 
2.7.4

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2016-12-01  6:55 [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] docs: Fix description of the sentence Zhang Chen
2016-12-01 14:57 ` [Qemu-devel] [PATCH for-2.8] " Eric Blake
2016-12-02  2:59   ` Zhang Chen
2016-12-02  3:14     ` Eric Blake
2016-12-02  7:57     ` [Qemu-devel] [Qemu-trivial] " Laurent Vivier
2016-12-07  8:58       ` Zhang Chen
2016-12-07  9:01         ` Laurent Vivier
2016-12-07 13:30           ` Stefan Hajnoczi
2016-12-08  1:32             ` [Qemu-devel] [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH for-2.9] " Zhang Chen
2016-12-26  7:26               ` Zhang Chen
2017-01-06  3:33                 ` Zhang Chen
2017-01-06  3:47                   ` Jason Wang

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