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From: Jason Wang <jasowang@redhat.com>
To: peter.maydell@linaro.org, qemu-devel@nongnu.org
Cc: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>,
	Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>, Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>,
	Jason Wang <jasowang@redhat.com>
Subject: [Qemu-devel] [PULL 1/6] docs: Fix description of the sentence
Date: Fri, 20 Jan 2017 11:07:45 +0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <1484881670-24237-2-git-send-email-jasowang@redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1484881670-24237-1-git-send-email-jasowang@redhat.com>

From: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>

Say it in another way to make it easier to understand.

Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>
Signed-off-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
Signed-off-by: Jason Wang <jasowang@redhat.com>
---
 docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++-
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
index 76767cb..c4941de 100644
--- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt
+++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
@@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary.
 
 == Usage ==
 
-Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
+Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
+clearly describe the usage.
+
 Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
 -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
 -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66
-- 
2.7.4

  reply	other threads:[~2017-01-20  3:08 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 8+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2017-01-20  3:07 [Qemu-devel] [PULL 0/6] Net patches Jason Wang
2017-01-20  3:07 ` Jason Wang [this message]
2017-01-20  3:07 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 2/6] net: optimize checksum computation Jason Wang
2017-01-20  3:07 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 3/6] m68k: QOMify the MCF Fast Ethernet Controller device Jason Wang
2017-01-20  3:07 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 4/6] hw/net/dp8393x: Avoid unintentional sign extensions on addresses Jason Wang
2017-01-20  3:07 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 5/6] hw/pci: use-after-free in pci_nic_init_nofail when nic device fails to initialize Jason Wang
2017-01-20  3:07 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 6/6] tap: fix memory leak on failure in net_init_tap() Jason Wang
2017-01-20 15:53 ` [Qemu-devel] [PULL 0/6] Net patches Peter Maydell

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