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From: Alon Levy <alevy@redhat.com>
To: Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org>
Cc: QEMU Trivial <qemu-trivial@nongnu.org>,
	Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>,
	qemu-devel@nongnu.org
Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] libcacard: Spelling and grammar fixes in documentation
Date: Mon, 27 Feb 2012 23:24:14 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20120227212414.GQ7395@garlic.redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <CAFEAcA_82UCPWVukhAWcxGjeRQfkb+_E7OOdx8fh9y-6Ya_OMg@mail.gmail.com>

On Sun, Feb 26, 2012 at 06:18:04PM +0000, Peter Maydell wrote:
> On 26 February 2012 13:30, Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de> wrote:
> > @@ -217,10 +217,10 @@ the card using the following functions:
> >          VCardStatus vcard_add_applet(VCard *card, VCardApplet *applet);
> >
> >   Add an applet onto the list of applets attached to the card. Once an applet
> > -  has been added, it can be selected by it's aid, and then commands will be
> > +  has been added, it can be selected by its aid, and then commands will be
> 
> While you're changing this line, it looks like 'aid' here should be 'AID'
> (it is capitalised elsewhere in the doc except where referring to a function
> parameter name).
> 
> >   routed to it VCardProcessAPDU function. This function adopts the applet the
> >   passed int applet.
> 
> The sentence "This function..." clearly needs correcting as it doesn't
> make much sense as it stands, but I'm not sure what it should be changed to.

Asked Robert Relyea (rrelyea@redhat.com - I guess he should be in
MAINTAINERS, although he is not..) and the answer was:
 This function adopts the applet that is passed into it.

> 
> > Note: 2 applets with the same AID should not be added to
> > -  the same card. It's permissible to add more than one applet. Multiple applets
> > +  the same card. It is permissible to add more than one applet. Multiple applets
> >   may have the same VCardPRocessAPDU entry point.
> 
> -- PMM
> 

      parent reply	other threads:[~2012-02-27 21:24 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2012-02-26 13:30 [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] libcacard: Spelling and grammar fixes in documentation Stefan Weil
2012-02-26 13:38 ` Alon Levy
2012-02-26 18:18 ` Peter Maydell
2012-02-26 18:52   ` Stefan Weil
2012-02-27 21:24   ` Alon Levy [this message]

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