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Iglesias" , Paolo Bonzini , Aurelien Jarno , Peter Maydell , Juan Quintela , =?UTF-8?q?C=C3=A9dric=20Le=20Goater?= , Richard Henderson , Joel Stanley , Leif Lindholm , Markus Armbruster , Radoslaw Biernacki , Stefan Hajnoczi , =?UTF-8?q?Marc-Andr=C3=A9=20Lureau?= , John Snow , Andrew Jeffery , David Hildenbrand , Bastian Koppelmann , Max Filippov , qemu-s390x@nongnu.org, Cleber Rosa , =?UTF-8?q?Philippe=20Mathieu-Daud=C3=A9?= , =?UTF-8?q?Daniel=20P=2E=20Berrang=C3=A9?= , qemu-arm@nongnu.org, Eduardo Habkost , Ilya Leoshkevich Subject: [PATCH 15/18] docs/system: remove excessive punctuation from guest-loader docs Date: Mon, 24 Apr 2023 10:22:46 +0100 Message-Id: <20230424092249.58552-16-alex.bennee@linaro.org> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.39.2 In-Reply-To: <20230424092249.58552-1-alex.bennee@linaro.org> References: <20230424092249.58552-1-alex.bennee@linaro.org> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Received-SPF: pass client-ip=2a00:1450:4864:20::431; envelope-from=alex.bennee@linaro.org; helo=mail-wr1-x431.google.com X-Spam_score_int: -20 X-Spam_score: -2.1 X-Spam_bar: -- X-Spam_report: (-2.1 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01 autolearn=unavailable autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org Sender: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org A possessive its needs no ' whereas the contraction of it is does. Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée Reviewed-by: Juan Quintela Reviewed-by: Thomas Huth Message-Id: <20230420155723.1711048-7-alex.bennee@linaro.org> --- docs/system/guest-loader.rst | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) diff --git a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst index 9ef9776bf0..304ee5d531 100644 --- a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst +++ b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ The guest loader does two things: - load blobs (kernels and initial ram disks) into memory - sets platform FDT data so hypervisors can find and boot them -This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using it's +This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using its multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: .. parsed-literal:: @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: -device guest-loader,addr=0x47000000,initrd=rootfs.cpio In the above example the Xen hypervisor is loaded by the -kernel -parameter and passed it's boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest +parameter and passed its boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest is loaded into the areas of memory. Each blob will get -``/chosen/module@`` entry in the FDT to indicate it's location and +``/chosen/module@`` entry in the FDT to indicate its location and size. Additional information can be passed with by using additional arguments. -- 2.39.2