From: John Snow <jsnow@redhat.com>
To: qemu-devel@nongnu.org
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"John Snow" <jsnow@redhat.com>
Subject: [PATCH 10/13] qapi: update prose in note blocks
Date: Tue, 18 Jun 2024 20:30:09 -0400 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240619003012.1753577-11-jsnow@redhat.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240619003012.1753577-1-jsnow@redhat.com>
Where I've noticed, rephrase the note to read more fluently.
Signed-off-by: John Snow <jsnow@redhat.com>
---
qapi/block-core.json | 4 ++--
qga/qapi-schema.json | 2 +-
2 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
diff --git a/qapi/block-core.json b/qapi/block-core.json
index cacedfb771c..9ef23ec02ae 100644
--- a/qapi/block-core.json
+++ b/qapi/block-core.json
@@ -6048,9 +6048,9 @@
#
# @name: the name of the internal snapshot to be created
#
-# .. note:: In transaction, if @name is empty, or any snapshot matching
+# .. note:: In a transaction, if @name is empty or any snapshot matching
# @name exists, the operation will fail. Only some image formats
-# support it, for example, qcow2, and rbd.
+# support it; for example, qcow2, and rbd.
#
# Since: 1.7
##
diff --git a/qga/qapi-schema.json b/qga/qapi-schema.json
index 57598331c5c..1273d85bb5f 100644
--- a/qga/qapi-schema.json
+++ b/qga/qapi-schema.json
@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@
#
# Returns: Number of file systems thawed by this call
#
-# .. note:: If return value does not match the previous call to
+# .. note:: If the return value does not match the previous call to
# guest-fsfreeze-freeze, this likely means some freezable filesystems
# were unfrozen before this call, and that the filesystem state may
# have changed before issuing this command.
--
2.44.0
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-06-19 0:32 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 53+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-06-19 0:29 [PATCH 00/13] qapi: convert "Note" and "Example" sections to rST John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 01/13] [DO-NOT-MERGE]: Add some ad-hoc linting helpers John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 02/13] qapi: linter fixups John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 03/13] docs/qapidoc: delint a tiny portion of the module John Snow
2024-06-19 6:28 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 17:06 ` John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 04/13] qapi/parser: preserve indentation in QAPIDoc sections John Snow
2024-06-19 12:03 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 14:47 ` John Snow
2024-06-20 15:07 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:14 ` John Snow
2024-06-21 6:38 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-21 17:28 ` John Snow
2024-06-22 8:48 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 05/13] qapi/parser: fix comment parsing immediately following a doc block John Snow
2024-06-19 12:04 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 06/13] docs/qapidoc: fix nested parsing under untagged sections John Snow
2024-06-19 12:05 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 07/13] qapi: fix non-compliant JSON examples John Snow
2024-06-19 12:07 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 08/13] qapi: ensure all errors sections are uniformly typset John Snow
2024-06-19 12:10 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:25 ` John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 09/13] qapi: convert "Note" sections to plain rST John Snow
2024-06-19 12:49 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 13:35 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:46 ` John Snow
2024-06-20 18:44 ` John Snow
2024-06-21 12:23 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-21 17:41 ` John Snow
2024-06-22 8:52 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:39 ` John Snow
2024-06-21 10:20 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 13:07 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:40 ` John Snow
2024-06-21 6:39 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 13:54 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-20 15:52 ` John Snow
2024-06-21 12:08 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-21 17:33 ` John Snow
2024-06-19 0:30 ` John Snow [this message]
2024-06-19 12:18 ` [PATCH 10/13] qapi: update prose in note blocks Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 11/13] qapi: add markup to " John Snow
2024-06-19 12:19 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 12/13] qapi/parser: don't parse rST markup as section headers John Snow
2024-06-19 12:55 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 0:30 ` [PATCH 13/13] qapi: convert "Example" sections to rST John Snow
2024-06-19 13:20 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-19 17:32 ` John Snow
2024-06-26 5:17 ` Markus Armbruster
2024-06-26 14:39 ` John Snow
2024-06-26 5:35 ` [PATCH 00/13] qapi: convert "Note" and " Markus Armbruster
2024-07-01 20:28 ` Michael S. Tsirkin
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