* [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1
@ 2011-04-16 19:38 Dan Church
2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil
0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Dan Church @ 2011-04-16 19:38 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: qemu-devel
It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
--- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
.IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
.IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
number and
the unit id.
.IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
.IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
of available connectors of a given interface type.
.IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
.IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
incremented:
.Sp
.Vb 1
-\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
.Ve
.Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
.Sp
.Vb 1
\& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
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* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1
2011-04-16 19:38 [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 Dan Church
@ 2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil
2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church
0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Stefan Weil @ 2011-04-16 20:25 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Dan Church; +Cc: qemu-devel
Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>
> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
> number and
> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
> number and
>
... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
The other changes look good.
> the unit id.
> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
> .IX Item "index=index"
> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
> of available connectors of a given interface type.
> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
> .IX Item "media=media"
> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
> incremented:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
> .Ve
> .Sp
> -is interpreted like:
> +is interpreted as:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>
>
>
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* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1
2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil
@ 2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church
2011-04-17 5:54 ` Stefan Weil
0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread
From: Dan Church @ 2011-04-17 1:25 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Stefan Weil; +Cc: qemu-devel
Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
Here's the final patch:
--- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
.IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
.IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
number and
the unit id.
.IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
.IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
of available connectors of a given interface type.
.IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
.IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
incremented:
.Sp
.Vb 1
-\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
.Ve
.Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
.Sp
.Vb 1
\& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>
>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>
>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>> number and
>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>> number and
>>
>
> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>
> The other changes look good.
>
>> the unit id.
>> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>> .IX Item "index=index"
>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the
>> list
>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the
>> list
>> of available connectors of a given interface type.
>> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>> .IX Item "media=media"
>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>> incremented:
>> .Sp
>> .Vb 1
>> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>> .Ve
>> .Sp
>> -is interpreted like:
>> +is interpreted as:
>> .Sp
>> .Vb 1
>> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>>
>>
>>
>
>
--
Fourth Law of Programming:
Anything that can go wrong wi
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* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1
2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church
@ 2011-04-17 5:54 ` Stefan Weil
0 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread
From: Stefan Weil @ 2011-04-17 5:54 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Dan Church; +Cc: qemu-devel
Am 17.04.2011 03:25, schrieb Dan Church:
> Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
> Here's the final patch:
>
> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
> number and
> +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
> number and
> the unit id.
> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
> .IX Item "index=index"
> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in
> the list
> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in
> the list
> of available connectors of a given interface type.
> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
> .IX Item "media=media"
> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
> incremented:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
> .Ve
> .Sp
> -is interpreted like:
> +is interpreted as:
> .Sp
> .Vb 1
> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>
>
> On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
>> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>>
>>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>>
>>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>>> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>>> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>>> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>>> number and
>>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>>> number and
>>>
>>
>> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>>
>> The other changes look good.
>>
>>> the unit id.
>>> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>>> .IX Item "index=index"
>>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index
>>> in the
>>> list
>>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index
>>> in the
>>> list
>>> of available connectors of a given interface type.
>>> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>>> .IX Item "media=media"
>>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>>> incremented:
>>> .Sp
>>> .Vb 1
>>> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>>> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>>> .Ve
>>> .Sp
>>> -is interpreted like:
>>> +is interpreted as:
>>> .Sp
>>> .Vb 1
>>> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
Could you please add a "Signed-off-by" signature and send the patch with
"git send-email"?
Thanks,
Stefan W.
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