From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([140.186.70.92]:51036) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBKw1-0002oA-MA for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sun, 17 Apr 2011 01:54:14 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBKw0-0002d0-OI for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sun, 17 Apr 2011 01:54:13 -0400 Received: from moutng.kundenserver.de ([212.227.17.9]:51550) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBKw0-0002cr-6r for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sun, 17 Apr 2011 01:54:12 -0400 Message-ID: <4DAA807C.1070706@mail.berlios.de> Date: Sun, 17 Apr 2011 07:54:04 +0200 From: Stefan Weil MIME-Version: 1.0 References: <4DA9FB2F.10405@mail.berlios.de> In-Reply-To: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , To: Dan Church Cc: qemu-devel@nongnu.org Am 17.04.2011 03:25, schrieb Dan Church: > Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place. > Here's the final patch: > > --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 > +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500 > @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ > Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. > .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 > .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" > -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus > number and > +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus > number and > the unit id. > .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 > .IX Item "index=index" > -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in > the list > +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in > the list > of available connectors of a given interface type. > .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 > .IX Item "media=media" > @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ > incremented: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" > +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b > .Ve > .Sp > -is interpreted like: > +is interpreted as: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b > > > On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil wrote: >> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: >>> >>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by >>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: >>> >>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 >>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 >>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ >>> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. >>> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" >>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus >>> number and >>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus >>> number and >>> >> >> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. >> >> The other changes look good. >> >>> the unit id. >>> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "index=index" >>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index >>> in the >>> list >>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index >>> in the >>> list >>> of available connectors of a given interface type. >>> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "media=media" >>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ >>> incremented: >>> .Sp >>> .Vb 1 >>> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" >>> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b >>> .Ve >>> .Sp >>> -is interpreted like: >>> +is interpreted as: >>> .Sp >>> .Vb 1 >>> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b Could you please add a "Signed-off-by" signature and send the patch with "git send-email"? Thanks, Stefan W.