* [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 @ 2011-04-16 19:38 Dan Church 2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil 0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread From: Dan Church @ 2011-04-16 19:38 UTC (permalink / raw) To: qemu-devel It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus number and +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus number and the unit id. .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 .IX Item "index=index" -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list of available connectors of a given interface type. .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 .IX Item "media=media" @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ incremented: .Sp .Vb 1 -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b .Ve .Sp -is interpreted like: +is interpreted as: .Sp .Vb 1 \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b -- Fourth Law of Programming: Anything that can go wrong wi sendmail: segmentation violated - core dumped ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread
* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 2011-04-16 19:38 [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 Dan Church @ 2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil 2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church 0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread From: Stefan Weil @ 2011-04-16 20:25 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Dan Church; +Cc: qemu-devel Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: > It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by > non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: > > --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 > +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 > @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ > Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. > .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 > .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" > -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus > number and > +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus > number and > ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. The other changes look good. > the unit id. > .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 > .IX Item "index=index" > -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list > +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list > of available connectors of a given interface type. > .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 > .IX Item "media=media" > @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ > incremented: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" > +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b > .Ve > .Sp > -is interpreted like: > +is interpreted as: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b > > > ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread
* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 2011-04-16 20:25 ` Stefan Weil @ 2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church 2011-04-17 5:54 ` Stefan Weil 0 siblings, 1 reply; 4+ messages in thread From: Dan Church @ 2011-04-17 1:25 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Stefan Weil; +Cc: qemu-devel Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place. Here's the final patch: --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500 @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus number and +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus number and the unit id. .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 .IX Item "index=index" -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list of available connectors of a given interface type. .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 .IX Item "media=media" @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ incremented: .Sp .Vb 1 -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b .Ve .Sp -is interpreted like: +is interpreted as: .Sp .Vb 1 \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote: > Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: >> >> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by >> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: >> >> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 >> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 >> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ >> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. >> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 >> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" >> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus >> number and >> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus >> number and >> > > ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. > > The other changes look good. > >> the unit id. >> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 >> .IX Item "index=index" >> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the >> list >> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the >> list >> of available connectors of a given interface type. >> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 >> .IX Item "media=media" >> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ >> incremented: >> .Sp >> .Vb 1 >> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" >> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b >> .Ve >> .Sp >> -is interpreted like: >> +is interpreted as: >> .Sp >> .Vb 1 >> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b >> >> >> > > -- Fourth Law of Programming: Anything that can go wrong wi sendmail: segmentation violated - core dumped ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread
* Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 2011-04-17 1:25 ` Dan Church @ 2011-04-17 5:54 ` Stefan Weil 0 siblings, 0 replies; 4+ messages in thread From: Stefan Weil @ 2011-04-17 5:54 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Dan Church; +Cc: qemu-devel Am 17.04.2011 03:25, schrieb Dan Church: > Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place. > Here's the final patch: > > --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 > +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500 > @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ > Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. > .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 > .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" > -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus > number and > +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus > number and > the unit id. > .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 > .IX Item "index=index" > -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in > the list > +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in > the list > of available connectors of a given interface type. > .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 > .IX Item "media=media" > @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ > incremented: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" > +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b > .Ve > .Sp > -is interpreted like: > +is interpreted as: > .Sp > .Vb 1 > \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b > > > On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote: >> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: >>> >>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by >>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: >>> >>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 >>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 >>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ >>> Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. >>> .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit" >>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus >>> number and >>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus >>> number and >>> >> >> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. >> >> The other changes look good. >> >>> the unit id. >>> .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "index=index" >>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index >>> in the >>> list >>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index >>> in the >>> list >>> of available connectors of a given interface type. >>> .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 >>> .IX Item "media=media" >>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ >>> incremented: >>> .Sp >>> .Vb 1 >>> -\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b" >>> +\& qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b >>> .Ve >>> .Sp >>> -is interpreted like: >>> +is interpreted as: >>> .Sp >>> .Vb 1 >>> \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b Could you please add a "Signed-off-by" signature and send the patch with "git send-email"? Thanks, Stefan W. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 4+ messages in thread
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