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From: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
To: Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org>
Cc: qemu-trivial@nongnu.org, qemu-devel@nongnu.org, patches@linaro.org
Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] ui/vnc-jobs.c: Fix minor typos in comments
Date: Thu, 18 Oct 2012 18:09:26 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <508029B6.8060301@weilnetz.de> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <1350572612-24268-1-git-send-email-peter.maydell@linaro.org>

Please see my comments below.

Am 18.10.2012 17:03, schrieb Peter Maydell:
> Fix some minor typos/grammar errors in comments.
>
> Signed-off-by: Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org>
> ---
>   ui/vnc-jobs.c |   16 ++++++++--------
>   1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/ui/vnc-jobs.c b/ui/vnc-jobs.c
> index 087b84d..84b074e 100644
> --- a/ui/vnc-jobs.c
> +++ b/ui/vnc-jobs.c
> @@ -33,21 +33,21 @@
>   /*
>    * Locking:
>    *
> - * There is three levels of locking:
> + * There are three levels of locking:
>    * - jobs queue lock: for each operation on the queue (push, pop, isEmpty?)
>    * - VncDisplay global lock: mainly used for framebuffer updates to avoid
>    *                      screen corruption if the framebuffer is updated
> - *			while the worker is doing something.
> + *                      while the worker is doing something.
>    * - VncState::output lock: used to make sure the output buffer is not corrupted
> - * 		   	 if two threads try to write on it at the same time
> + *                          two threads try to write on it at the same time


Did you remove the 'if' intentionally? Then I'd expect a comma after
'corrupted', because 'two threads try to write ...' is a new sentence.


>    *
> - * While the VNC worker thread is working, the VncDisplay global lock is hold
> - * to avoid screen corruptions (this does not block vnc_refresh() because it
> - * uses trylock()) but the output lock is not hold because the thread work on
> + * While the VNC worker thread is working, the VncDisplay global lock is held
> + * to avoid screen corruption (this does not block vnc_refresh() because it
> + * uses trylock()) but the output lock is not held because the thread works on
>    * its own output buffer.
>    * When the encoding job is done, the worker thread will hold the output lock
>    * and copy its output buffer in vs->output.
> -*/
> + */
>   
>   struct VncJobQueue {
>       QemuCond cond;
> @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ typedef struct VncJobQueue VncJobQueue;
>   
>   /*
>    * We use a single global queue, but most of the functions are
> - * already reetrant, so we can easilly add more than one encoding thread
> + * already reentrant, so we can easily add more than one encoding thread
>    */
>   static VncJobQueue *queue;


Reviewed-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>

Cheers
Stefan

  reply	other threads:[~2012-10-18 16:09 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 3+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2012-10-18 15:03 [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] ui/vnc-jobs.c: Fix minor typos in comments Peter Maydell
2012-10-18 16:09 ` Stefan Weil [this message]
2012-10-18 16:38   ` Peter Maydell

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