Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH v3] misc: Spelling and grammar fixes in comments

[Don Koch <dkoch@cloudswitch.com>]

On 10/11/2013 04:08 PM, Stefan Weil wrote:
> Am 11.10.2013 22:03, schrieb Don Koch:
>> On 10/11/2013 03:34 PM, Stefan Weil wrote:
>>> * it's -> its
>>> * grammar fix in ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h
>>>
>>> Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
>>> ---
>>>
>>> This is v3 of http://patchwork.ozlabs.org/patch/257416/.
>>>
>>> v3:
>>> Don't try to improve a strange sentence in the same context ("Of cause [...]").
>>>
>>>  qapi-schema.json    |    2 +-
>>>  slirp/if.c          |    2 +-
>>>  ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h |    2 +-
>>>  3 files changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>>>
>>> diff --git a/qapi-schema.json b/qapi-schema.json
>>> index 60f3fd1..a003aa1 100644
>>> --- a/qapi-schema.json
>>> +++ b/qapi-schema.json
>>> @@ -1914,7 +1914,7 @@
>>>  #
>>>  # Since: 0.14.0
>>>  #
>>> -# Notes: This command only exists as a stop-gap.  It's use is highly
>>> +# Notes: This command only exists as a stop-gap.  Its use is highly
>>>  #        discouraged.  The semantics of this command are not guaranteed.
>>>  #
>>>  #        Known limitations:
>>> diff --git a/slirp/if.c b/slirp/if.c
>>> index 87ca8a5..fb7acf8 100644
>>> --- a/slirp/if.c
>>> +++ b/slirp/if.c
>>> @@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ diddit:
>>>  
>>>  /*
>>>   * Send a packet
>>> - * We choose a packet based on it's position in the output queues;
>>> + * We choose a packet based on its position in the output queues;
>>>   * If there are packets on the fastq, they are sent FIFO, before
>>>   * everything else.  Otherwise we choose the first packet from the
>>>   * batchq and send it.  the next packet chosen will be from the session
>>> diff --git a/ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h b/ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h
>>> index 1ff40b1..d436d58 100644
>>> --- a/ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h
>>> +++ b/ui/vnc-enc-zywrle.h
>>> @@ -305,7 +305,7 @@ static inline void harr(int8_t *px0, int8_t *px1)
>>>     |L1H0H1H0|L1H0H1H0|L1H0H1H0|L1H0H1H0| : level 1
>>>  
>>>   In this method, H/L and X0/X1 is always same position.
>>> - This lead us to more speed and less memory.
>>> + This leads us to more speed and less memory.
>>>   Of cause, the result of both method is quite same
>>>   because it's only difference that coefficient position.
>>>  */
>>>
>> Since you're in the neighborhood, this paragraph needs more fixes:
>>
>>  In this method, H/L and X0/X1 is always in the same position.
> 
> Shouldn't it be "are always"? :-)

Yes. I got swamped by the other typos. :-)
> 
>>  This leads us to more speed and less memory.
>>  Of course, the result of both methods is the same
>>  because the only difference is the coefficient position.
>>
>> Thanks,
>> -d
> 
> Maybe. Please let us fix that in a later patch.\

Works for me.

> See also the previous discussion
> (http://patchwork.ozlabs.org/patch/257416/).

I had unfortunately deleted that thread when I saw there was an update.
*sigh*

> Regards,
> Stefan

Reviewed-By: Don Koch <dkoch@verizon.com>

-d