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From: "Alex Bennée" <alex.bennee@linaro.org>
To: Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org>
Cc: "Pierrick Bouvier" <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org>,
	qemu-devel@nongnu.org,
	"Philippe Mathieu-Daudé" <philmd@linaro.org>,
	"Richard Henderson" <richard.henderson@linaro.org>,
	"Andrew Melnychenko" <andrew@daynix.com>,
	"Daniel P. Berrangé" <berrange@redhat.com>,
	"Jason Wang" <jasowang@redhat.com>,
	"Thomas Huth" <thuth@redhat.com>,
	"Vladimir Sementsov-Ogievskiy" <vsementsov@yandex-team.ru>,
	"Fabiano Rosas" <farosas@suse.de>,
	"Kevin Wolf" <kwolf@redhat.com>,
	"Markus Armbruster" <armbru@redhat.com>,
	"Eric Blake" <eblake@redhat.com>,
	qemu-arm@nongnu.org,
	"Yuri Benditovich" <yuri.benditovich@daynix.com>,
	manos.pitsidianakis@linaro.org, qemu-block@nongnu.org,
	"Michael Roth" <michael.roth@amd.com>,
	"Konstantin Kostiuk" <kkostiuk@redhat.com>,
	"Paolo Bonzini" <pbonzini@redhat.com>,
	"Peter Xu" <peterx@redhat.com>,
	gustavo.romero@linaro.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 6/7] docs: add a glossary
Date: Tue, 03 Dec 2024 18:10:44 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <87ttbkbpsr.fsf@draig.linaro.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <CAFEAcA9JdLxi5cr-Z2-YX6Q8nv=j0O3k=f9u6gS-CzSf5BH7Ug@mail.gmail.com> (Peter Maydell's message of "Tue, 3 Dec 2024 17:37:22 +0000")

Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org> writes:

> On Mon, 18 Nov 2024 at 17:24, Pierrick Bouvier
> <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org> wrote:
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Pierrick Bouvier <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org>
>> ---
>>  docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst |   2 +
>>  docs/devel/multi-thread-tcg.rst       |   2 +
>>  docs/glossary/index.rst               | 238 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>>  docs/index.rst                        |   1 +
>>  docs/system/arm/virt.rst              |   2 +
>>  docs/system/images.rst                |   2 +
>>  docs/tools/qemu-nbd.rst               |   2 +
>>  7 files changed, 249 insertions(+)
>>  create mode 100644 docs/glossary/index.rst
>
> I think this is a good idea; we've had at least one bug
> report from a user pointing out that we had a term in
> our docs which we didn't define ("block driver"):
> https://gitlab.com/qemu-project/qemu/-/issues/2611
> I have some comments on specific entries below.
>
>> diff --git a/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst b/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst
>> index e6b73a4fe1a..3d5702fa4cc 100644
>> --- a/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst
<snip>
>> +
>> +Device
>> +------
>> +
>> +QEMU is able to emulate a CPU, and all the hardware interacting with it,
>> +including many devices. When QEMU runs a virtual machine using a hardware-based
>> +accelerator, it is responsible for emulating, using software, all devices.
>
> This definition doesn't actually define what a device is :-)

Also we can xref to:

  https://qemu.readthedocs.io/en/v9.1.0/system/device-emulation.html

where we go into a bit more detail about what a device, bus, frontend
and backend are.

>
>> +
>> +EDK2
>> +----
>> +
>> +EDK2, as known as `TianoCore <https://www.tianocore.org/>`_, is an open source
>> +implementation of UEFI standard. It's ran by QEMU to support UEFI for virtual
>> +machines.
>
> Replace last sentence with
> "QEMU virtual machines that boot a UEFI BIOS usually use EDK2."
> ?
>
<snip>

-- 
Alex Bennée
Virtualisation Tech Lead @ Linaro


  reply	other threads:[~2024-12-03 18:12 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 39+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2024-11-18 17:23 [PATCH 0/7] Enhance documentation for new developers Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 1/7] docs/devel: remove dead video link for sourcehut submit process Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19  8:25   ` Thomas Huth
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 2/7] docs/devel: add git-publish for patch submitting Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19  8:41   ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-19  9:12     ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20  6:29       ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-20  6:25     ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-20  9:51       ` Alex Bennée
2024-11-20 10:01         ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19  9:04   ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 21:45     ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 3/7] docs/devel: add b4 for patch retrieval Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19  9:14   ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19  9:56     ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-19 10:07       ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 10:40         ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 4/7] docs/devel: add information on how to setup build environments Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19  9:24   ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 11:08     ` Alex Bennée
2024-11-19 11:16       ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 21:58     ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 5/7] docs: add a codebase section Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 15:53   ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 17:22     ` Alex Bennée
2024-12-03 17:46       ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 19:35         ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-04  8:58       ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-12-03 21:02     ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 6/7] docs: add a glossary Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 17:37   ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 18:10     ` Alex Bennée [this message]
2024-12-03 19:37       ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 20:32     ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-05 15:23       ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-05 19:21         ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 7/7] docs: add a how to section Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19  9:29   ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 22:05     ` Pierrick Bouvier

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