From: "Alex Bennée" <alex.bennee@linaro.org>
To: Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org>
Cc: "Pierrick Bouvier" <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org>,
qemu-devel@nongnu.org,
"Philippe Mathieu-Daudé" <philmd@linaro.org>,
"Richard Henderson" <richard.henderson@linaro.org>,
"Andrew Melnychenko" <andrew@daynix.com>,
"Daniel P. Berrangé" <berrange@redhat.com>,
"Jason Wang" <jasowang@redhat.com>,
"Thomas Huth" <thuth@redhat.com>,
"Vladimir Sementsov-Ogievskiy" <vsementsov@yandex-team.ru>,
"Fabiano Rosas" <farosas@suse.de>,
"Kevin Wolf" <kwolf@redhat.com>,
"Markus Armbruster" <armbru@redhat.com>,
"Eric Blake" <eblake@redhat.com>,
qemu-arm@nongnu.org,
"Yuri Benditovich" <yuri.benditovich@daynix.com>,
manos.pitsidianakis@linaro.org, qemu-block@nongnu.org,
"Michael Roth" <michael.roth@amd.com>,
"Konstantin Kostiuk" <kkostiuk@redhat.com>,
"Paolo Bonzini" <pbonzini@redhat.com>,
"Peter Xu" <peterx@redhat.com>,
gustavo.romero@linaro.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH 6/7] docs: add a glossary
Date: Tue, 03 Dec 2024 18:10:44 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <87ttbkbpsr.fsf@draig.linaro.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <CAFEAcA9JdLxi5cr-Z2-YX6Q8nv=j0O3k=f9u6gS-CzSf5BH7Ug@mail.gmail.com> (Peter Maydell's message of "Tue, 3 Dec 2024 17:37:22 +0000")
Peter Maydell <peter.maydell@linaro.org> writes:
> On Mon, 18 Nov 2024 at 17:24, Pierrick Bouvier
> <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org> wrote:
>>
>> Signed-off-by: Pierrick Bouvier <pierrick.bouvier@linaro.org>
>> ---
>> docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst | 2 +
>> docs/devel/multi-thread-tcg.rst | 2 +
>> docs/glossary/index.rst | 238 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++
>> docs/index.rst | 1 +
>> docs/system/arm/virt.rst | 2 +
>> docs/system/images.rst | 2 +
>> docs/tools/qemu-nbd.rst | 2 +
>> 7 files changed, 249 insertions(+)
>> create mode 100644 docs/glossary/index.rst
>
> I think this is a good idea; we've had at least one bug
> report from a user pointing out that we had a term in
> our docs which we didn't define ("block driver"):
> https://gitlab.com/qemu-project/qemu/-/issues/2611
> I have some comments on specific entries below.
>
>> diff --git a/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst b/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst
>> index e6b73a4fe1a..3d5702fa4cc 100644
>> --- a/docs/devel/control-flow-integrity.rst
<snip>
>> +
>> +Device
>> +------
>> +
>> +QEMU is able to emulate a CPU, and all the hardware interacting with it,
>> +including many devices. When QEMU runs a virtual machine using a hardware-based
>> +accelerator, it is responsible for emulating, using software, all devices.
>
> This definition doesn't actually define what a device is :-)
Also we can xref to:
https://qemu.readthedocs.io/en/v9.1.0/system/device-emulation.html
where we go into a bit more detail about what a device, bus, frontend
and backend are.
>
>> +
>> +EDK2
>> +----
>> +
>> +EDK2, as known as `TianoCore <https://www.tianocore.org/>`_, is an open source
>> +implementation of UEFI standard. It's ran by QEMU to support UEFI for virtual
>> +machines.
>
> Replace last sentence with
> "QEMU virtual machines that boot a UEFI BIOS usually use EDK2."
> ?
>
<snip>
--
Alex Bennée
Virtualisation Tech Lead @ Linaro
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2024-12-03 18:12 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 39+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2024-11-18 17:23 [PATCH 0/7] Enhance documentation for new developers Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 1/7] docs/devel: remove dead video link for sourcehut submit process Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19 8:25 ` Thomas Huth
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 2/7] docs/devel: add git-publish for patch submitting Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19 8:41 ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-19 9:12 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 6:29 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-20 6:25 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-20 9:51 ` Alex Bennée
2024-11-20 10:01 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 9:04 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 21:45 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 3/7] docs/devel: add b4 for patch retrieval Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19 9:14 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 9:56 ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-19 10:07 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 10:40 ` Marcin Juszkiewicz
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 4/7] docs/devel: add information on how to setup build environments Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19 9:24 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-19 11:08 ` Alex Bennée
2024-11-19 11:16 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 21:58 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 5/7] docs: add a codebase section Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 15:53 ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 17:22 ` Alex Bennée
2024-12-03 17:46 ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 19:35 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-04 8:58 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-12-03 21:02 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 6/7] docs: add a glossary Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 17:37 ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-03 18:10 ` Alex Bennée [this message]
2024-12-03 19:37 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-03 20:32 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-12-05 15:23 ` Peter Maydell
2024-12-05 19:21 ` Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-18 17:23 ` [PATCH 7/7] docs: add a how to section Pierrick Bouvier
2024-11-19 9:29 ` Daniel P. Berrangé
2024-11-20 22:05 ` Pierrick Bouvier
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