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Subject: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1
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It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:

--- qemu/qemu.1.orig	2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1	2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
 Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
 .IP "\fBbus=3D\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=3D\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
 .IX Item "bus=3Dbus,unit=3Dunit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
number and
 the unit id.
 .IP "\fBindex=3D\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
 .IX Item "index=3Dindex"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the =
list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the =
list
 of available connectors of a given interface type.
 .IP "\fBmedia=3D\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
 .IX Item "media=3Dmedia"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
 incremented:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
-\&        qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db"
+\&        qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db
 .Ve
 .Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
 \&        qemu \-hda a \-hdb b


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