Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1

[Dan Church <amphetamachine@gmail.com>]

Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place.
Here's the final patch:

--- qemu/qemu.1.orig	2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
+++ qemu/qemu.1	2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500
@@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
 Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
 .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
 .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
-These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
number and
+These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus
number and
 the unit id.
 .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
 .IX Item "index=index"
-This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the list
+This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the list
 of available connectors of a given interface type.
 .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
 .IX Item "media=media"
@@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
 incremented:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
-\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
+\&        qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
 .Ve
 .Sp
-is interpreted like:
+is interpreted as:
 .Sp
 .Vb 1
 \&        qemu \-hda a \-hdb b


On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil <weil@mail.berlios.de> wrote:
> Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church:
>>
>> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by
>> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat:
>>
>> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig    2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500
>> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500
>> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@
>>  Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio.
>>  .IP "\fBbus=\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=\fR\fIunit\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "bus=bus,unit=unit"
>> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus
>> number and
>> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus
>> number and
>>
>
> ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change.
>
> The other changes look good.
>
>>  the unit id.
>>  .IP "\fBindex=\fR\fIindex\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "index=index"
>> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the
>> list
>> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the
>> list
>>  of available connectors of a given interface type.
>>  .IP "\fBmedia=\fR\fImedia\fR" 4
>>  .IX Item "media=media"
>> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@
>>  incremented:
>>  .Sp
>>  .Vb 1
>> -\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b"
>> +\&         qemu \-drive file=a \-drive file=b
>>  .Ve
>>  .Sp
>> -is interpreted like:
>> +is interpreted as:
>>  .Sp
>>  .Vb 1
>>  \&         qemu \-hda a \-hdb b
>>
>>
>>
>
>



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