From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([140.186.70.92]:38238) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBGkM-0002GG-7f for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sat, 16 Apr 2011 21:25:55 -0400 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBGkL-0002wN-86 for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sat, 16 Apr 2011 21:25:54 -0400 Received: from mail-iy0-f173.google.com ([209.85.210.173]:33199) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1QBGkL-0002wJ-2J for qemu-devel@nongnu.org; Sat, 16 Apr 2011 21:25:53 -0400 Received: by iym10 with SMTP id 10so3820081iym.4 for ; Sat, 16 Apr 2011 18:25:52 -0700 (PDT) MIME-Version: 1.0 In-Reply-To: <4DA9FB2F.10405@mail.berlios.de> References: <4DA9FB2F.10405@mail.berlios.de> From: Dan Church Date: Sat, 16 Apr 2011 20:25:32 -0500 Message-ID: Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable Subject: Re: [Qemu-devel] [PATCH] Fix some wording in qemu.1 List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , To: Stefan Weil Cc: qemu-devel@nongnu.org Yeah, sorry about that. I pressed 'p' in Vim in the wrong place. Here's the final patch: --- qemu/qemu.1.orig 2011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:56:56.000000000 -0500 @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. .IP "\fBbus=3D\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=3D\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 .IX Item "bus=3Dbus,unit=3Dunit" -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus number and +These options define where the drive is connected by defining the bus number and the unit id. .IP "\fBindex=3D\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 .IX Item "index=3Dindex" -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in the = list +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in the = list of available connectors of a given interface type. .IP "\fBmedia=3D\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 .IX Item "media=3Dmedia" @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ incremented: .Sp .Vb 1 -\& qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db" +\& qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db .Ve .Sp -is interpreted like: +is interpreted as: .Sp .Vb 1 \& qemu \-hda a \-hdb b On Sat, Apr 16, 2011 at 15:25, Stefan Weil wrote: > Am 16.04.2011 21:38, schrieb Dan Church: >> >> It was apparent that some parts of the man page were written by >> non-native English speaker(s), so I figured I'd help out somewhat: >> >> --- qemu/qemu.1.orig =C2=A0 =C2=A02011-04-16 14:33:06.000000000 -0500 >> +++ qemu/qemu.1 2011-04-16 14:36:38.000000000 -0500 >> @@ -271,11 +271,11 @@ >> =C2=A0Available types are: ide, scsi, sd, mtd, floppy, pflash, virtio. >> =C2=A0.IP "\fBbus=3D\fR\fIbus\fR\fB,unit=3D\fR\fIunit\fR" 4 >> =C2=A0.IX Item "bus=3Dbus,unit=3Dunit" >> -These options define where is connected the drive by defining the bus >> number and >> +These options define where the drive by is connected defining the bus >> number and >> > > ... where the drive is connected by defining ...? See also next change. > > The other changes look good. > >> =C2=A0the unit id. >> =C2=A0.IP "\fBindex=3D\fR\fIindex\fR" 4 >> =C2=A0.IX Item "index=3Dindex" >> -This option defines where is connected the drive by using an index in t= he >> list >> +This option defines where the drive is connected by using an index in t= he >> list >> =C2=A0of available connectors of a given interface type. >> =C2=A0.IP "\fBmedia=3D\fR\fImedia\fR" 4 >> =C2=A0.IX Item "media=3Dmedia" >> @@ -376,10 +376,10 @@ >> =C2=A0incremented: >> =C2=A0.Sp >> =C2=A0.Vb 1 >> -\& =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db" >> +\& =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 qemu \-drive file=3Da \-drive file=3Db >> =C2=A0.Ve >> =C2=A0.Sp >> -is interpreted like: >> +is interpreted as: >> =C2=A0.Sp >> =C2=A0.Vb 1 >> =C2=A0\& =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 =C2=A0 qemu \-hda a \-hdb b >> >> >> > > --=20 =C2=A0=C2=A0 Fourth Law of Programming: =C2=A0=C2=A0 Anything that can go wrong wi sendmail: segmentation violated - core dumped