[PATCH QEMU 0/2] migration: craft the doc comments

[PATCH QEMU 0/2] migration: craft the doc comments

[~hyman]

Hi, Markus,

This patchset aims to reformat migration doc comments
as commit a937b6aa739. Meanwhile, add myself
to the dirty-limit feature maintainer list.

Please review, Thanks.

Yong


Hyman Huang(黄勇) (2):
  qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments
  MAINTAINERS: Add Hyman Huang to dirty-limit feature

 MAINTAINERS         |  6 +++++
 qapi/migration.json | 66 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
 2 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)

-- 
2.38.5

[PATCH QEMU 1/2] qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments

[~hyman]

From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>

Reformat migration doc comments to conform to current conventions
as commit a937b6aa739 (qapi: Reformat doc comments to conform to
current conventions).

Also, craft the dirty-limit capability comment.

Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
---
 qapi/migration.json | 66 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
 1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)

diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json
index 6b49593d2f..5d5649c885 100644
--- a/qapi/migration.json
+++ b/qapi/migration.json
@@ -258,17 +258,17 @@
 #     blocked.  Present and non-empty when migration is blocked.
 #     (since 6.0)
 #
-# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time (in microseconds) of virtual
-#                                       CPUs each dirty ring full round, which shows how
-#                                       MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the guest
-#                                       during live migration. (since 8.1)
-#
-# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full time (in microseconds)
-#                              each dirty ring full round, note that the value equals
-#                              dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page rate
-#                              of virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the average
-#                              memory load of virtual CPU indirectly. Note that zero
-#                              means guest doesn't dirty memory (since 8.1)
+# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
+#     (in microseconds) of virtual CPUs each dirty ring full round,
+#     which shows how MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the
+#     guest during live migration.  (Since 8.1)
+#
+# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
+#     time (in microseconds) each dirty ring full round. The value
+#     equals dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page
+#     rate of the virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the
+#     average memory load of the virtual CPU indirectly. Note that
+#     zero means guest doesn't dirty memory.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # Since: 0.14
 ##
@@ -519,15 +519,11 @@
 #     are present.  'return-path' capability must be enabled to use
 #     it.  (since 8.1)
 #
-# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will use the dirty-limit algo to
-#               throttle down guest instead of auto-converge algo.
-#               Throttle algo only works when vCPU's dirtyrate greater
-#               than 'vcpu-dirty-limit', read processes in guest os
-#               aren't penalized any more, so this algo can improve
-#               performance of vCPU during live migration. This is an
-#               optional performance feature and should not affect the
-#               correctness of the existing auto-converge algo.
-#               (since 8.1)
+# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will throttle vCPUs as needed to
+#     keep their dirty page rate within @vcpu-dirty-limit.  This can
+#     improve responsiveness of large guests during live migration,
+#     and can result in more stable read performance.  Requires KVM
+#     with accelerator property "dirty-ring-size" set.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # Features:
 #
@@ -822,17 +818,17 @@
 #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
 #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
 #
-# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
-#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
-#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
+# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
+#     limit during  live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
+#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
-#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
+#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # Features:
 #
 # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
-#            are experimental.
+#     are experimental.
 #
 # Since: 2.4
 ##
@@ -988,17 +984,17 @@
 #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
 #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
 #
-# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
-#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
-#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
+# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
+#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
+#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
-#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
+#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # Features:
 #
 # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
-#            are experimental.
+#     are experimental.
 #
 # TODO: either fuse back into MigrationParameters, or make
 #     MigrationParameters members mandatory
@@ -1191,17 +1187,17 @@
 #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
 #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
 #
-# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
-#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
-#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
+# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
+#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
+#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
-#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
+#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
 #
 # Features:
 #
 # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
-#            are experimental.
+#     are experimental.
 #
 # Since: 2.4
 ##
-- 
2.38.5

Re: [PATCH QEMU 1/2] qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments

[Markus Armbruster]

~hyman <hyman@git.sr.ht> writes:

> From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
>
> Reformat migration doc comments to conform to current conventions
> as commit a937b6aa739 (qapi: Reformat doc comments to conform to
> current conventions).
>
> Also, craft the dirty-limit capability comment.

Split into two patches?

> Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
> ---
>  qapi/migration.json | 66 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
>  1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json
> index 6b49593d2f..5d5649c885 100644
> --- a/qapi/migration.json
> +++ b/qapi/migration.json
> @@ -258,17 +258,17 @@
>  #     blocked.  Present and non-empty when migration is blocked.
>  #     (since 6.0)
>  #
> -# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time (in microseconds) of virtual
> -#                                       CPUs each dirty ring full round, which shows how
> -#                                       MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the guest
> -#                                       during live migration. (since 8.1)
> -#
> -# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full time (in microseconds)
> -#                              each dirty ring full round, note that the value equals
> -#                              dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page rate
> -#                              of virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the average
> -#                              memory load of virtual CPU indirectly. Note that zero
> -#                              means guest doesn't dirty memory (since 8.1)
> +# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
> +#     (in microseconds) of virtual CPUs each dirty ring full round,
> +#     which shows how MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the

Perhaps "for each ... round"?

Remind me, what's a "dirty ring full round"?

> +#     guest during live migration.  (Since 8.1)
> +#
> +# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
> +#     time (in microseconds) each dirty ring full round. The value

Likewise.

> +#     equals dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page

"the dirty ring memory size divided by the average ..."

> +#     rate of the virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the
> +#     average memory load of the virtual CPU indirectly. Note that
> +#     zero means guest doesn't dirty memory.  (Since 8.1)

Two spaces between sentences for consistency.

>  #
>  # Since: 0.14
>  ##
> @@ -519,15 +519,11 @@
>  #     are present.  'return-path' capability must be enabled to use
>  #     it.  (since 8.1)
>  #
> -# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will use the dirty-limit algo to
> -#               throttle down guest instead of auto-converge algo.
> -#               Throttle algo only works when vCPU's dirtyrate greater
> -#               than 'vcpu-dirty-limit', read processes in guest os
> -#               aren't penalized any more, so this algo can improve
> -#               performance of vCPU during live migration. This is an
> -#               optional performance feature and should not affect the
> -#               correctness of the existing auto-converge algo.
> -#               (since 8.1)
> +# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will throttle vCPUs as needed to
> +#     keep their dirty page rate within @vcpu-dirty-limit.  This can
> +#     improve responsiveness of large guests during live migration,
> +#     and can result in more stable read performance.  Requires KVM
> +#     with accelerator property "dirty-ring-size" set.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # Features:
>  #
> @@ -822,17 +818,17 @@
>  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
>  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
>  #
> -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
> -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
> -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> +#     limit during  live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,

Single space in "during live", and two space between sentences, please.

> +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)

I dislike that we mix milli- and microseconds.  Too late to fix, I'm
afraid.

Remind me, what't the "periodic time of dirty limit during live
migration"?

>  #
>  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # Features:
>  #
>  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> -#            are experimental.
> +#     are experimental.
>  #
>  # Since: 2.4
>  ##
> @@ -988,17 +984,17 @@
>  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
>  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
>  #
> -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
> -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
> -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> +#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,

Two spaces between sentences.

> +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # Features:
>  #
>  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> -#            are experimental.
> +#     are experimental.
>  #
>  # TODO: either fuse back into MigrationParameters, or make
>  #     MigrationParameters members mandatory
> @@ -1191,17 +1187,17 @@
>  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
>  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
>  #
> -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty limit during
> -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
> -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> +#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,

Two spaces between sentences.

> +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
>  #
>  # Features:
>  #
>  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> -#            are experimental.
> +#     are experimental.
>  #
>  # Since: 2.4
>  ##

Re: [PATCH QEMU 1/2] qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments

[Yong Huang]

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On Fri, Jul 28, 2023 at 3:49 PM Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com> wrote:

> ~hyman <hyman@git.sr.ht> writes:
>
> > From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
> >
> > Reformat migration doc comments to conform to current conventions
> > as commit a937b6aa739 (qapi: Reformat doc comments to conform to
> > current conventions).
> >
> > Also, craft the dirty-limit capability comment.
>
> Split into two patches?
>
Ok.

>
> > Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
> > ---
> >  qapi/migration.json | 66 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
> >  1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
> >
> > diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json
> > index 6b49593d2f..5d5649c885 100644
> > --- a/qapi/migration.json
> > +++ b/qapi/migration.json
> > @@ -258,17 +258,17 @@
> >  #     blocked.  Present and non-empty when migration is blocked.
> >  #     (since 6.0)
> >  #
> > -# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time (in
> microseconds) of virtual
> > -#                                       CPUs each dirty ring full
> round, which shows how
> > -#                                       MigrationCapability dirty-limit
> affects the guest
> > -#                                       during live migration. (since
> 8.1)
> > -#
> > -# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full time
> (in microseconds)
> > -#                              each dirty ring full round, note that
> the value equals
> > -#                              dirty ring memory size divided by
> average dirty page rate
> > -#                              of virtual CPU, which can be used to
> observe the average
> > -#                              memory load of virtual CPU indirectly.
> Note that zero
> > -#                              means guest doesn't dirty memory (since
> 8.1)
> > +# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
> > +#     (in microseconds) of virtual CPUs each dirty ring full round,
> > +#     which shows how MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the
>
> Perhaps "for each ... round"?
>
> Remind me, what's a "dirty ring full round"?
>
Every time the x86 PML buffer is filled with gpa, hardware throws an
exception and
guest exits to kvm, then to qemu. Qemu will handle the exception with
reaping the
dirty ring and get the dirty page info, then enter the kvm, empty the PML
buffer and
enter guests again, i call this "dirty ring full round", but it seems not
straightforward,
please help me describe that,  thanks.


> > +#     guest during live migration.  (Since 8.1)
> > +#
> > +# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
> > +#     time (in microseconds) each dirty ring full round. The value
>
> Likewise.
>
> > +#     equals dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page
>
> "the dirty ring memory size divided by the average ..."
>
> > +#     rate of the virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the
> > +#     average memory load of the virtual CPU indirectly. Note that
> > +#     zero means guest doesn't dirty memory.  (Since 8.1)
>
> Two spaces between sentences for consistency.
>
> >  #
> >  # Since: 0.14
> >  ##
> > @@ -519,15 +519,11 @@
> >  #     are present.  'return-path' capability must be enabled to use
> >  #     it.  (since 8.1)
> >  #
> > -# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will use the dirty-limit algo to
> > -#               throttle down guest instead of auto-converge algo.
> > -#               Throttle algo only works when vCPU's dirtyrate greater
> > -#               than 'vcpu-dirty-limit', read processes in guest os
> > -#               aren't penalized any more, so this algo can improve
> > -#               performance of vCPU during live migration. This is an
> > -#               optional performance feature and should not affect the
> > -#               correctness of the existing auto-converge algo.
> > -#               (since 8.1)
> > +# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will throttle vCPUs as needed to
> > +#     keep their dirty page rate within @vcpu-dirty-limit.  This can
> > +#     improve responsiveness of large guests during live migration,
> > +#     and can result in more stable read performance.  Requires KVM
> > +#     with accelerator property "dirty-ring-size" set.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # Features:
> >  #
> > @@ -822,17 +818,17 @@
> >  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
> >  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
> >  #
> > -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> limit during
> > -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1
> to 1000ms,
> > -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> > +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> > +#     limit during  live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
>
> Single space in "during live", and two space between sentences, please.
>
> > +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
>
> I dislike that we mix milli- and microseconds.  Too late to fix, I'm
> afraid.
>
> Remind me, what't the "periodic time of dirty limit during live
> migration"?
>
It is the period to calculate the dirty page rate for each vCPU.
So Qemu will use it to compare with the dirty-limit value.
If the period is too short, cpu overhead is increasing and if
it is too long, the result may not be precise. So we make it
configurable.

>
> >  #
> >  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> > -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> > +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # Features:
> >  #
> >  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> > -#            are experimental.
> > +#     are experimental.
> >  #
> >  # Since: 2.4
> >  ##
> > @@ -988,17 +984,17 @@
> >  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
> >  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
> >  #
> > -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> limit during
> > -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1
> to 1000ms,
> > -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> > +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> > +#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
>
> Two spaces between sentences.
>
> > +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> > -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> > +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # Features:
> >  #
> >  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> > -#            are experimental.
> > +#     are experimental.
> >  #
> >  # TODO: either fuse back into MigrationParameters, or make
> >  #     MigrationParameters members mandatory
> > @@ -1191,17 +1187,17 @@
> >  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
> >  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
> >  #
> > -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> limit during
> > -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1
> to 1000ms,
> > -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> > +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
> > +#     limit during live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
>
> Two spaces between sentences.
>
> > +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # @vcpu-dirty-limit: Dirtyrate limit (MB/s) during live migration.
> > -#                    Defaults to 1. (Since 8.1)
> > +#     Defaults to 1.  (Since 8.1)
> >  #
> >  # Features:
> >  #
> >  # @unstable: Members @x-checkpoint-delay and @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period
> > -#            are experimental.
> > +#     are experimental.
> >  #
> >  # Since: 2.4
> >  ##
>
>

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Best regards

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Re: [PATCH QEMU 1/2] qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments

[Markus Armbruster]

Yong Huang <yong.huang@smartx.com> writes:

> On Fri, Jul 28, 2023 at 3:49 PM Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com> wrote:
>
>> ~hyman <hyman@git.sr.ht> writes:
>>
>> > From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
>> >
>> > Reformat migration doc comments to conform to current conventions
>> > as commit a937b6aa739 (qapi: Reformat doc comments to conform to
>> > current conventions).
>> >
>> > Also, craft the dirty-limit capability comment.
>>
>> Split into two patches?
>>
> Ok.
>
>>
>> > Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
>> > ---
>> >  qapi/migration.json | 66 +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
>> >  1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
>> >
>> > diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json
>> > index 6b49593d2f..5d5649c885 100644
>> > --- a/qapi/migration.json
>> > +++ b/qapi/migration.json
>> > @@ -258,17 +258,17 @@
>> >  #     blocked.  Present and non-empty when migration is blocked.
>> >  #     (since 6.0)
>> >  #
>> > -# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time (inmicroseconds) of virtual
>> > -#                                       CPUs each dirty ring fullround, which shows how
>> > -#                                       MigrationCapability dirty-limitaffects the guest
>> > -#                                       during live migration. (since8.1)
>> > -#
>> > -# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full time(in microseconds)
>> > -#                              each dirty ring full round, note thatthe value equals
>> > -#                              dirty ring memory size divided byaverage dirty page rate
>> > -#                              of virtual CPU, which can be used toobserve the average
>> > -#                              memory load of virtual CPU indirectly.Note that zero
>> > -#                              means guest doesn't dirty memory (since8.1)
>> > +# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
>> > +#     (in microseconds) of virtual CPUs each dirty ring full round,
>> > +#     which shows how MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the
>>
>> Perhaps "for each ... round"?
>>
>> Remind me, what's a "dirty ring full round"?
>>
> Every time the x86 PML buffer is filled with gpa, hardware throws an
> exception and
> guest exits to kvm, then to qemu. Qemu will handle the exception with
> reaping the
> dirty ring and get the dirty page info, then enter the kvm, empty the PML
> buffer and
> enter guests again, i call this "dirty ring full round", but it seems not
> straightforward,
> please help me describe that,  thanks.

"x86 PML" is page modification logging, right?

>> > +#     guest during live migration.  (Since 8.1)
>> > +#
>> > +# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
>> > +#     time (in microseconds) each dirty ring full round. The value
>>
>> Likewise.
>>
>> > +#     equals dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page
>>
>> "the dirty ring memory size divided by the average ..."
>>
>> > +#     rate of the virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the
>> > +#     average memory load of the virtual CPU indirectly. Note that
>> > +#     zero means guest doesn't dirty memory.  (Since 8.1)
>>
>> Two spaces between sentences for consistency.
>>
>> >  #
>> >  # Since: 0.14
>> >  ##
>> > @@ -519,15 +519,11 @@
>> >  #     are present.  'return-path' capability must be enabled to use
>> >  #     it.  (since 8.1)
>> >  #
>> > -# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will use the dirty-limit algo to
>> > -#               throttle down guest instead of auto-converge algo.
>> > -#               Throttle algo only works when vCPU's dirtyrate greater
>> > -#               than 'vcpu-dirty-limit', read processes in guest os
>> > -#               aren't penalized any more, so this algo can improve
>> > -#               performance of vCPU during live migration. This is an
>> > -#               optional performance feature and should not affect the
>> > -#               correctness of the existing auto-converge algo.
>> > -#               (since 8.1)
>> > +# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will throttle vCPUs as needed to
>> > +#     keep their dirty page rate within @vcpu-dirty-limit.  This can
>> > +#     improve responsiveness of large guests during live migration,
>> > +#     and can result in more stable read performance.  Requires KVM
>> > +#     with accelerator property "dirty-ring-size" set.  (Since 8.1)
>> >  #
>> >  # Features:
>> >  #
>> > @@ -822,17 +818,17 @@
>> >  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one, and
>> >  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
>> >  #
>> > -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirtylimit during
>> > -#                             live migration. Should be in the range 1to 1000ms,
>> > -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
>> > +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of dirty
>> > +#     limit during  live migration. Should be in the range 1 to 1000ms,
>>
>> Single space in "during live", and two space between sentences, please.
>>
>> > +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
>>
>> I dislike that we mix milli- and microseconds.  Too late to fix, I'm
>> afraid.
>>
>> Remind me, what't the "periodic time of dirty limit during live
>> migration"?
>>
> It is the period to calculate the dirty page rate for each vCPU.
> So Qemu will use it to compare with the dirty-limit value.
> If the period is too short, cpu overhead is increasing and if
> it is too long, the result may not be precise. So we make it
> configurable.

The limited migration knowledge I have wasn't enough to review the doc
part of your QAPI schema patch with reasonable effort and within a
reasonable time.  You had to answer a lot of fairly basic questions.
Thanks for your patience.

Perhaps I should've given up and left the docs to the migration
maintainers.

I believe what I've been missing is an overview of the dirty limit
algorithm to throttle guests being live-migrated.

Could we have that in docs/devel/migration.rst?

Apropos migration.rst: not a peep on compression.  Juan, Peter,
Leonardo, should it be covered there?

[...]

Re: [PATCH QEMU 1/2] qapi: Reformat and craft the migration doc comments

[Yong Huang]

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On Tue, Aug 1, 2023 at 8:33 PM Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com> wrote:

> Yong Huang <yong.huang@smartx.com> writes:
>
> > On Fri, Jul 28, 2023 at 3:49 PM Markus Armbruster <armbru@redhat.com>
> wrote:
> >
> >> ~hyman <hyman@git.sr.ht> writes:
> >>
> >> > From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
> >> >
> >> > Reformat migration doc comments to conform to current conventions
> >> > as commit a937b6aa739 (qapi: Reformat doc comments to conform to
> >> > current conventions).
> >> >
> >> > Also, craft the dirty-limit capability comment.
> >>
> >> Split into two patches?
> >>
> > Ok.
> >
> >>
> >> > Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
> >> > ---
> >> >  qapi/migration.json | 66
> +++++++++++++++++++++------------------------
> >> >  1 file changed, 31 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
> >> >
> >> > diff --git a/qapi/migration.json b/qapi/migration.json
> >> > index 6b49593d2f..5d5649c885 100644
> >> > --- a/qapi/migration.json
> >> > +++ b/qapi/migration.json
> >> > @@ -258,17 +258,17 @@
> >> >  #     blocked.  Present and non-empty when migration is blocked.
> >> >  #     (since 6.0)
> >> >  #
> >> > -# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
> (inmicroseconds) of virtual
> >> > -#                                       CPUs each dirty ring
> fullround, which shows how
> >> > -#                                       MigrationCapability
> dirty-limitaffects the guest
> >> > -#                                       during live migration.
> (since8.1)
> >> > -#
> >> > -# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
> time(in microseconds)
> >> > -#                              each dirty ring full round, note
> thatthe value equals
> >> > -#                              dirty ring memory size divided
> byaverage dirty page rate
> >> > -#                              of virtual CPU, which can be used
> toobserve the average
> >> > -#                              memory load of virtual CPU
> indirectly.Note that zero
> >> > -#                              means guest doesn't dirty memory
> (since8.1)
> >> > +# @dirty-limit-throttle-time-per-round: Maximum throttle time
> >> > +#     (in microseconds) of virtual CPUs each dirty ring full round,
> >> > +#     which shows how MigrationCapability dirty-limit affects the
> >>
> >> Perhaps "for each ... round"?
> >>
> >> Remind me, what's a "dirty ring full round"?
> >>
> > Every time the x86 PML buffer is filled with gpa, hardware throws an
> > exception and
> > guest exits to kvm, then to qemu. Qemu will handle the exception with
> > reaping the
> > dirty ring and get the dirty page info, then enter the kvm, empty the PML
> > buffer and
> > enter guests again, i call this "dirty ring full round", but it seems not
> > straightforward,
> > please help me describe that,  thanks.
>
> "x86 PML" is page modification logging, right?
>
Yes.

The dirty ring full round may be actually imprecise indeed. I'll try to
refactor the
comment in the next version, hoping to do better.

>
> >> > +#     guest during live migration.  (Since 8.1)
> >> > +#
> >> > +# @dirty-limit-ring-full-time: Estimated average dirty ring full
> >> > +#     time (in microseconds) each dirty ring full round. The value
> >>
> >> Likewise.
> >>
> >> > +#     equals dirty ring memory size divided by average dirty page
> >>
> >> "the dirty ring memory size divided by the average ..."
> >>
> >> > +#     rate of the virtual CPU, which can be used to observe the
> >> > +#     average memory load of the virtual CPU indirectly. Note that
> >> > +#     zero means guest doesn't dirty memory.  (Since 8.1)
> >>
> >> Two spaces between sentences for consistency.
> >>
> >> >  #
> >> >  # Since: 0.14
> >> >  ##
> >> > @@ -519,15 +519,11 @@
> >> >  #     are present.  'return-path' capability must be enabled to use
> >> >  #     it.  (since 8.1)
> >> >  #
> >> > -# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will use the dirty-limit algo
> to
> >> > -#               throttle down guest instead of auto-converge algo.
> >> > -#               Throttle algo only works when vCPU's dirtyrate
> greater
> >> > -#               than 'vcpu-dirty-limit', read processes in guest os
> >> > -#               aren't penalized any more, so this algo can improve
> >> > -#               performance of vCPU during live migration. This is an
> >> > -#               optional performance feature and should not affect
> the
> >> > -#               correctness of the existing auto-converge algo.
> >> > -#               (since 8.1)
> >> > +# @dirty-limit: If enabled, migration will throttle vCPUs as needed
> to
> >> > +#     keep their dirty page rate within @vcpu-dirty-limit.  This can
> >> > +#     improve responsiveness of large guests during live migration,
> >> > +#     and can result in more stable read performance.  Requires KVM
> >> > +#     with accelerator property "dirty-ring-size" set.  (Since 8.1)
> >> >  #
> >> >  # Features:
> >> >  #
> >> > @@ -822,17 +818,17 @@
> >> >  #     Nodes are mapped to their block device name if there is one,
> and
> >> >  #     to their node name otherwise.  (Since 5.2)
> >> >  #
> >> > -# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of
> dirtylimit during
> >> > -#                             live migration. Should be in the range
> 1to 1000ms,
> >> > -#                             defaults to 1000ms. (Since 8.1)
> >> > +# @x-vcpu-dirty-limit-period: Periodic time (in milliseconds) of
> dirty
> >> > +#     limit during  live migration. Should be in the range 1 to
> 1000ms,
> >>
> >> Single space in "during live", and two space between sentences, please.
> >>
> >> > +#     defaults to 1000ms.  (Since 8.1)
> >>
> >> I dislike that we mix milli- and microseconds.  Too late to fix, I'm
> >> afraid.
> >>
> >> Remind me, what't the "periodic time of dirty limit during live
> >> migration"?
> >>
> > It is the period to calculate the dirty page rate for each vCPU.
> > So Qemu will use it to compare with the dirty-limit value.
> > If the period is too short, cpu overhead is increasing and if
> > it is too long, the result may not be precise. So we make it
> > configurable.
>
> The limited migration knowledge I have wasn't enough to review the doc
> part of your QAPI schema patch with reasonable effort and within a
> reasonable time.  You had to answer a lot of fairly basic questions.
> Thanks for your patience.
>
Not at all, feel free to comment on the patch set. I'll try my best to
reply.

>
> Perhaps I should've given up and left the docs to the migration
> maintainers.
>
> I believe what I've been missing is an overview of the dirty limit
> algorithm to throttle guests being live-migrated.
>
> Could we have that in docs/devel/migration.rst?
>
No problem, I'll do that and request for comments in the next version.

>
> Apropos migration.rst: not a peep on compression.  Juan, Peter,
> Leonardo, should it be covered there?
>
> [...]
>
>

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[PATCH QEMU 2/2] MAINTAINERS: Add Hyman Huang to dirty-limit feature

[~hyman]

From: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>

Signed-off-by: Hyman Huang(黄勇) <yong.huang@smartx.com>
---
 MAINTAINERS | 6 ++++++
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+)

diff --git a/MAINTAINERS b/MAINTAINERS
index 12e59b6b27..d72fd63a8e 100644
--- a/MAINTAINERS
+++ b/MAINTAINERS
@@ -3437,6 +3437,12 @@ F: hw/core/clock-vmstate.c
 F: hw/core/qdev-clock.c
 F: docs/devel/clocks.rst
 
+Dirty-limit feature
+M: Hyman Huang <yong.huang@smartx.com>
+S: Maintained
+F: softmmu/dirtylimit.c
+F: include/sysemu/dirtylimit.h
+
 Usermode Emulation
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 Overall usermode emulation
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