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On 11/01/2016 12:19 PM, Stefan Weil wrote:
> Fix also some indefinite articles.
>=20
> Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
> ---
>=20
> I still don't understand the comment in docs/colo-proxy.txt.

Me neither.


> +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
> @@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ secondary.
> =20
>  =3D=3D Usage =3D=3D
> =20
> -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
> +Here, we use demo ip and port describe more clearly.
>  Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
>  -netdev tap,id=3Dhn0,vhost=3Doff,script=3D/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=3D=
/etc/qemu-ifdown
>  -device e1000,id=3De0,netdev=3Dhn0,mac=3D52:a4:00:12:78:66

Maybe:

Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
clearly describe the usage.

The remaining hunks are clear improvements, so:
Reviewed-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>

--=20
Eric Blake   eblake redhat com    +1-919-301-3266
Libvirt virtualization library http://libvirt.org


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