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[80.187.127.44]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id p6-20020adfe606000000b002ff1751ec79sm2341066wrm.65.2023.04.20.09.35.24 (version=TLS1_3 cipher=TLS_AES_128_GCM_SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 20 Apr 2023 09:35:25 -0700 (PDT) Message-ID: Date: Thu, 20 Apr 2023 18:35:23 +0200 MIME-Version: 1.0 User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (X11; Linux x86_64; rv:102.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/102.9.0 Subject: Re: [PATCH 6/9] docs/system: remove excessive punctuation from guest-loader docs Content-Language: en-US To: =?UTF-8?Q?Alex_Benn=c3=a9e?= , qemu-devel@nongnu.org Cc: Elena Ufimtseva , =?UTF-8?Q?Daniel_P=2e_Berrang=c3=a9?= , peter.maydell@linaro.org, =?UTF-8?Q?Philippe_Mathieu-Daud=c3=a9?= , Paolo Bonzini , Markus Armbruster , Alexandre Iooss , John G Johnson , Jagannathan Raman , Juan Quintela , Eduardo Habkost , Richard Henderson , Mahmoud Mandour References: <20230420155723.1711048-1-alex.bennee@linaro.org> <20230420155723.1711048-7-alex.bennee@linaro.org> From: Thomas Huth In-Reply-To: <20230420155723.1711048-7-alex.bennee@linaro.org> Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8; format=flowed Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit Received-SPF: pass client-ip=170.10.129.124; envelope-from=thuth@redhat.com; helo=us-smtp-delivery-124.mimecast.com X-Spam_score_int: -37 X-Spam_score: -3.8 X-Spam_bar: --- X-Spam_report: (-3.8 / 5.0 requ) BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIMWL_WL_HIGH=-0.001, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_EF=-0.1, NICE_REPLY_A=-1.669, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_NONE=-0.0001, RCVD_IN_MSPIKE_H2=-0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01 autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no X-Spam_action: no action X-BeenThere: qemu-devel@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.29 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , Errors-To: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org Sender: qemu-devel-bounces+qemu-devel=archiver.kernel.org@nongnu.org On 20/04/2023 17.57, Alex Bennée wrote: > A possessive its needs no ' whereas the contraction of it is does. > > Signed-off-by: Alex Bennée > --- > docs/system/guest-loader.rst | 6 +++--- > 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > index 9ef9776bf0..304ee5d531 100644 > --- a/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > +++ b/docs/system/guest-loader.rst > @@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ The guest loader does two things: > - load blobs (kernels and initial ram disks) into memory > - sets platform FDT data so hypervisors can find and boot them > > -This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using it's > +This is what is typically done by a boot-loader like grub using its > multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: > > .. parsed-literal:: > @@ -25,9 +25,9 @@ multi-boot capability. A typical example would look like: > -device guest-loader,addr=0x47000000,initrd=rootfs.cpio > > In the above example the Xen hypervisor is loaded by the -kernel > -parameter and passed it's boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest > +parameter and passed its boot arguments via -append. The Dom0 guest > is loaded into the areas of memory. Each blob will get > -``/chosen/module@`` entry in the FDT to indicate it's location and > +``/chosen/module@`` entry in the FDT to indicate its location and > size. Additional information can be passed with by using additional > arguments. > Reviewed-by: Thomas Huth