From: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>
To: qemu devel <qemu-devel@nongnu.org>,
QEMU Trivial <qemu-trivial@nongnu.org>,
Michael Tokarev <mjt@tls.msk.ru>,
Laurent Vivier <laurent@vivier.eu>
Cc: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>,
Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>, Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
Subject: [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH] docs: Fix description of the sentence
Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:55:57 +0800 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <1480575357-25056-1-git-send-email-zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com> (raw)
Say it in another way to make it easier to understand.
Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen <zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com>
Signed-off-by: Eric Blake <eblake@redhat.com>
Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil <sw@weilnetz.de>
---
docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++-
1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-)
diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
index 76767cb..c4941de 100644
--- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt
+++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt
@@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary.
== Usage ==
-Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly.
+Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more
+clearly describe the usage.
+
Primary(ip:3.3.3.3):
-netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown
-device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66
--
2.7.4
next reply other threads:[~2016-12-01 6:57 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 12+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2016-12-01 6:55 Zhang Chen [this message]
2016-12-01 14:57 ` [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH for-2.8] docs: Fix description of the sentence Eric Blake
2016-12-02 2:59 ` [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] " Zhang Chen
2016-12-02 3:14 ` Eric Blake
2016-12-02 7:57 ` Laurent Vivier
2016-12-07 8:58 ` Zhang Chen
2016-12-07 9:01 ` Laurent Vivier
2016-12-07 13:30 ` Stefan Hajnoczi
2016-12-08 1:32 ` [Qemu-trivial] [Qemu-devel] [PATCH for-2.9] " Zhang Chen
2016-12-26 7:26 ` Zhang Chen
2017-01-06 3:33 ` Zhang Chen
2017-01-06 3:47 ` Jason Wang
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