From mboxrd@z Thu Jan 1 00:00:00 1970 Received: from list by lists.gnu.org with archive (Exim 4.71) id 1cCLJJ-0001Tc-PJ for mharc-qemu-trivial@gnu.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:37 -0500 Received: from eggs.gnu.org ([2001:4830:134:3::10]:35939) by lists.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJG-0001Rr-R4 for qemu-trivial@nongnu.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:35 -0500 Received: from Debian-exim by eggs.gnu.org with spam-scanned (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJF-0007oa-VB for qemu-trivial@nongnu.org; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:34 -0500 Received: from [59.151.112.132] (port=55960 helo=heian.cn.fujitsu.com) by eggs.gnu.org with esmtp (Exim 4.71) (envelope-from ) id 1cCLJA-0007gr-Bs; Thu, 01 Dec 2016 01:57:28 -0500 X-IronPort-AV: E=Sophos;i="5.22,518,1449504000"; d="scan'208";a="13498100" Received: from unknown (HELO cn.fujitsu.com) ([10.167.33.5]) by heian.cn.fujitsu.com with ESMTP; 01 Dec 2016 14:57:08 +0800 Received: from G08CNEXCHPEKD03.g08.fujitsu.local (unknown [10.167.33.85]) by cn.fujitsu.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 05A5A41B5F58; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:57:09 +0800 (CST) Received: from localhost.localdomain (10.167.226.56) by G08CNEXCHPEKD03.g08.fujitsu.local (10.167.33.89) with Microsoft SMTP Server (TLS) id 14.3.319.2; Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:57:07 +0800 From: Zhang Chen To: qemu devel , QEMU Trivial , Michael Tokarev , Laurent Vivier CC: Zhang Chen , Eric Blake , Stefan Weil Date: Thu, 1 Dec 2016 14:55:57 +0800 Message-ID: <1480575357-25056-1-git-send-email-zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com> X-Mailer: git-send-email 2.7.4 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain X-Originating-IP: [10.167.226.56] X-yoursite-MailScanner-ID: 05A5A41B5F58.AE5B4 X-yoursite-MailScanner: Found to be clean X-yoursite-MailScanner-From: zhangchen.fnst@cn.fujitsu.com X-detected-operating-system: by eggs.gnu.org: Genre and OS details not recognized. X-Received-From: 59.151.112.132 Subject: [Qemu-trivial] [PATCH] docs: Fix description of the sentence X-BeenThere: qemu-trivial@nongnu.org X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.21 Precedence: list List-Id: List-Unsubscribe: , List-Archive: List-Post: List-Help: List-Subscribe: , X-List-Received-Date: Thu, 01 Dec 2016 06:57:35 -0000 Say it in another way to make it easier to understand. Signed-off-by: Zhang Chen Signed-off-by: Eric Blake Signed-off-by: Stefan Weil --- docs/colo-proxy.txt | 4 +++- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 1 deletion(-) diff --git a/docs/colo-proxy.txt b/docs/colo-proxy.txt index 76767cb..c4941de 100644 --- a/docs/colo-proxy.txt +++ b/docs/colo-proxy.txt @@ -158,7 +158,9 @@ secondary. == Usage == -Here, we use demo ip and port discribe more clearly. +Here is an example using demonstration IP and port addresses to more +clearly describe the usage. + Primary(ip:3.3.3.3): -netdev tap,id=hn0,vhost=off,script=/etc/qemu-ifup,downscript=/etc/qemu-ifdown -device e1000,id=e0,netdev=hn0,mac=52:a4:00:12:78:66 -- 2.7.4