From: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha@redhat.com>
To: Yodel Eldar <yodel.eldar@yodel.dev>
Cc: virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev
Subject: Re: [PATCH] packed-ring.tex: Add comma and remove redundancy to improve readability
Date: Mon, 26 Jan 2026 10:54:28 -0500 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20260126155428.GB7901@fedora> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20260124001740.34803-1-yodel.eldar@yodel.dev>
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On Fri, Jan 23, 2026 at 06:17:40PM -0600, Yodel Eldar wrote:
> A comma after "set" separates the prepositional phrase from the main
> clause where both the prepositional object and subject of the main
> clause are long descriptor flags, thereby improving readability.
>
> Also, the second "is" refers to the same subject as the first and is,
> therefore, redundant. Eliminating it improves the flow of the sentence.
>
> Signed-off-by: Yodel Eldar <yodel.eldar@yodel.dev>
> ---
> packed-ring.tex | 4 ++--
> 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
Reviewed-by: Stefan Hajnoczi <stefanha@redhat.com>
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2026-01-24 0:17 [PATCH] packed-ring.tex: Add comma and remove redundancy to improve readability Yodel Eldar
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