* [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name
@ 2024-09-07 16:52 Parav Pandit
2024-09-09 14:18 ` Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen
0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread
From: Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-07 16:52 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: virtio-comment, mst, cohuck; +Cc: shahafs, Parav Pandit
The description is for the type VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST;
however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it.
Branch: virtio-1.4
Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts")
Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com>
---
admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++--
1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex
index 27d8251..3a16692 100644
--- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex
+++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex
@@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev
device responds with \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The
\field{hdr_list_count.count} indicates an count of
\field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata entries that the device can
-provide when the \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR
+provide when the \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST
in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET command.
-When \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR,
+When \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST,
the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list}
indicates the device parts metadata.
--
2.34.1
^ permalink raw reply related [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread* Re: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-07 16:52 [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-09 14:18 ` Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen 2024-09-10 16:46 ` Parav Pandit 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen @ 2024-09-09 14:18 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Parav Pandit; +Cc: virtio-comment, mst, cohuck, shahafs On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > The description is for the type VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts") > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > --- > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev > device responds with \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The > \field{hdr_list_count.count} indicates an count of > \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata entries that the device can > -provide when the \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > +provide when the \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET command. > > -When \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > +When \field{type} is set to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > indicates the device parts metadata. > > -- > 2.34.1 > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I wonder if you would like to do the same here for consistency but I do not have a strong opinion about this. Otherwise, Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> Thanks, Matias. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* RE: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-09 14:18 ` Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen @ 2024-09-10 16:46 ` Parav Pandit 2024-09-10 16:48 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 16:46 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen Cc: virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, mst@redhat.com, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > The description is for the type > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts") > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > --- > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic > > Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev device responds with > > \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The \field{hdr_list_count.count} > > indicates an count of \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata > > entries that the device can -provide when the \field{type} is set to > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > command. > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > +When \field{type} is set to > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > -- > > 2.34.1 > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I wonder if you > would like to do the same here for consistency but I do not have a strong > opinion about this. Otherwise, > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general language improvement separate patch. Will look. > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > Thanks, Matias. Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* Re: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 16:46 ` Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 16:48 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 2024-09-10 16:51 ` Parav Pandit 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-10 16:48 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Parav Pandit Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:46:34PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > The description is for the type > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts") > > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > > --- > > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic > > > Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev device responds with > > > \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The \field{hdr_list_count.count} > > > indicates an count of \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata > > > entries that the device can -provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > > command. > > > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > > +When \field{type} is set to > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > > > -- > > > 2.34.1 > > > > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I wonder if you > > would like to do the same here for consistency but I do not have a strong > > opinion about this. Otherwise, > > > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general language improvement separate patch. > Will look. It just typesets it as italic ATM. Worth doing to avoid confusion, as some fields are plain english words. > > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > Thanks, Matias. > > Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* RE: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 16:48 ` Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-10 16:51 ` Parav Pandit 2024-09-10 18:34 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 16:51 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Michael S. Tsirkin Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2024 10:18 PM > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:46:34PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > > > > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > The description is for the type > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts") > > > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > > > --- > > > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic > > > > Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev device responds with > > > > \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The \field{hdr_list_count.count} > > > > indicates an count of \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata > > > > entries that the device can -provide when the \field{type} is set > > > > to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > > > command. > > > > > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > > > +When \field{type} is set to > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > > > > > -- > > > > 2.34.1 > > > > > > > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I > > > wonder if you would like to do the same here for consistency but I > > > do not have a strong opinion about this. Otherwise, > > > > > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general > language improvement separate patch. > > Will look. > > > It just typesets it as italic ATM. Worth doing to avoid confusion, as some > fields are plain english words. > Do you mean to add word 'field' wherever missing as Matias suggested? If so, no strong opinion to me, I will run a separate patch for such improvements without fixes tag. > > > > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > > Thanks, Matias. > > > > Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* Re: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 16:51 ` Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 18:34 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 2024-09-10 18:54 ` Parav Pandit 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-10 18:34 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Parav Pandit Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:51:03PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > > Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2024 10:18 PM > > > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:46:34PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > > > > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > > > > > > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > The description is for the type > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > > > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > > > > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > > > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device parts") > > > > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > > > > --- > > > > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > > > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > > > > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > > > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device parts}\label{sec:Basic > > > > > Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev device responds with > > > > > \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The \field{hdr_list_count.count} > > > > > indicates an count of \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata > > > > > entries that the device can -provide when the \field{type} is set > > > > > to VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > > > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > > > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > > > > command. > > > > > > > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > > > > +When \field{type} is set to > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > > > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > > > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > 2.34.1 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I > > > > wonder if you would like to do the same here for consistency but I > > > > do not have a strong opinion about this. Otherwise, > > > > > > > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general > > language improvement separate patch. > > > Will look. > > > > > > It just typesets it as italic ATM. Worth doing to avoid confusion, as some > > fields are plain english words. > > > Do you mean to add word 'field' wherever missing as Matias suggested? If it's a field in a struct, it should be in italics, yes. I didn't get which field Matias refers to, exactly. > If so, no strong opinion to me, I will run a separate patch for such improvements without fixes tag. > > > > > > > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > > > > Thanks, Matias. > > > > > > Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* RE: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 18:34 ` Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-10 18:54 ` Parav Pandit 2024-09-10 20:21 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 18:54 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Michael S. Tsirkin Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > Sent: Wednesday, September 11, 2024 12:05 AM > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:51:03PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > > > Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2024 10:18 PM > > > > > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:46:34PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > > > > > > > > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > The description is for the type > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > > > > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > > > > > > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > > > > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device > > > > > > parts") > > > > > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > > > > > --- > > > > > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > > > > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > > > > > > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > > > > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device > > > > > > parts}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev > > > > > > device responds with \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The > > > > > > \field{hdr_list_count.count} indicates an count of > > > > > > \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata entries that the > > > > > > device can -provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > > > > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > > > > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > > > > > command. > > > > > > > > > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > > > > > +When \field{type} is set to > > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > > > > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > > > > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > > 2.34.1 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I > > > > > wonder if you would like to do the same here for consistency but > > > > > I do not have a strong opinion about this. Otherwise, > > > > > > > > > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general > > > language improvement separate patch. > > > > Will look. > > > > > > > > > It just typesets it as italic ATM. Worth doing to avoid confusion, > > > as some fields are plain english words. > > > > > Do you mean to add word 'field' wherever missing as Matias suggested? > > > If it's a field in a struct, it should be in italics, yes. It is already in italics. The question was : should be written as, Option_A: \field{type} field indicates so-n-so... or Option_B: \field{type} indicates so-n-soo.. > I didn't get which field > Matias refers to, exactly. > > > If so, no strong opinion to me, I will run a separate patch for such > improvements without fixes tag. > > > > > > > > > > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, Matias. > > > > > > > > Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* Re: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 18:54 ` Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-10 20:21 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 2024-09-11 3:19 ` Parav Pandit 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-10 20:21 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Parav Pandit Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 06:54:38PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > > Sent: Wednesday, September 11, 2024 12:05 AM > > > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:51:03PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > > > > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > > > > Sent: Tuesday, September 10, 2024 10:18 PM > > > > > > > > On Tue, Sep 10, 2024 at 04:46:34PM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > From: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > > Sent: Monday, September 9, 2024 7:48 PM > > > > > > > > > > > > On Sat, Sep 07, 2024 at 07:52:18PM +0300, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > > > > The description is for the type > > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST; > > > > > > > however, it referred to a non-existent definition. Correct it. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > Branch: virtio-1.4 > > > > > > > Fixes: aa4f6f069ab3 ("admin: Add admin commands for device > > > > > > > parts") > > > > > > > Signed-off-by: Parav Pandit <parav@nvidia.com> > > > > > > > --- > > > > > > > admin-cmds-device-parts.tex | 4 ++-- > > > > > > > 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) > > > > > > > > > > > > > > diff --git a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > > b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex index 27d8251..3a16692 100644 > > > > > > > --- a/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > > +++ b/admin-cmds-device-parts.tex > > > > > > > @@ -152,10 +152,10 @@ \subsubsection{Device > > > > > > > parts}\label{sec:Basic Facilities of a Virtio Device / Dev > > > > > > > device responds with \field{hdr_list_count.count}. The > > > > > > > \field{hdr_list_count.count} indicates an count of > > > > > > > \field{struct virtio_dev_part_hdr} metadata entries that the > > > > > > > device can -provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR > > > > > > > +provide when the \field{type} is set to > > > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST > > > > > > > in a subsequent VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_GET > > > > > > command. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -When \field{type} is set to > > > > > > > VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_HDR, > > > > > > > +When \field{type} is set to > > > > > > > +VIRTIO_ADMIN_CMD_DEV_PARTS_METADATA_TYPE_LIST, > > > > > > > the device responds with \field{hdr_list}. \field{hdr_list} > > > > > > > indicates the device parts metadata. > > > > > > > > > > > > > > -- > > > > > > > 2.34.1 > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > > In previous patches, I see the pattern `\field{type} field`. I > > > > > > wonder if you would like to do the same here for consistency but > > > > > > I do not have a strong opinion about this. Otherwise, > > > > > > > > > > > True, maybe I can remove 'field' word from some places in general > > > > language improvement separate patch. > > > > > Will look. > > > > > > > > > > > > It just typesets it as italic ATM. Worth doing to avoid confusion, > > > > as some fields are plain english words. > > > > > > > Do you mean to add word 'field' wherever missing as Matias suggested? > > > > > > If it's a field in a struct, it should be in italics, yes. > It is already in italics. > > The question was : should be written as, > > Option_A: \field{type} field indicates so-n-so... > or > Option_B: \field{type} indicates so-n-soo.. Ah. I don't really feel adding "field" adds much, because of italics and because one can see it's a field from the name. So, brevity wins. > > I didn't get which field > > Matias refers to, exactly. > > > > > If so, no strong opinion to me, I will run a separate patch for such > > improvements without fixes tag. > > > > > > > > > > > > > Reviewed-by: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen <mvaralar@redhat.com> > > > > > > > > > > > > Thanks, Matias. > > > > > > > > > > Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* RE: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-10 20:21 ` Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-11 3:19 ` Parav Pandit 2024-09-11 10:01 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 0 siblings, 1 reply; 10+ messages in thread From: Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-11 3:19 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Michael S. Tsirkin Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > Sent: Wednesday, September 11, 2024 1:51 AM [..] > > It is already in italics. > > > > The question was : should be written as, > > > > Option_A: \field{type} field indicates so-n-so... > > or > > Option_B: \field{type} indicates so-n-soo.. > > Ah. > > I don't really feel adding "field" adds much, because of italics and because > one can see it's a field from the name. > So, brevity wins. Ok. Got it. The current patch is discussion does not have word 'field'. So current patch is good as-is. Thanks. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
* Re: [PATCH] device-parts: editorial: Fix metadata type name 2024-09-11 3:19 ` Parav Pandit @ 2024-09-11 10:01 ` Michael S. Tsirkin 0 siblings, 0 replies; 10+ messages in thread From: Michael S. Tsirkin @ 2024-09-11 10:01 UTC (permalink / raw) To: Parav Pandit Cc: Matias Ezequiel Vara Larsen, virtio-comment@lists.linux.dev, cohuck@redhat.com, Shahaf Shuler On Wed, Sep 11, 2024 at 03:19:45AM +0000, Parav Pandit wrote: > > > > From: Michael S. Tsirkin <mst@redhat.com> > > Sent: Wednesday, September 11, 2024 1:51 AM > > [..] > > > It is already in italics. > > > > > > The question was : should be written as, > > > > > > Option_A: \field{type} field indicates so-n-so... > > > or > > > Option_B: \field{type} indicates so-n-soo.. > > > > Ah. > > > > I don't really feel adding "field" adds much, because of italics and because > > one can see it's a field from the name. > > So, brevity wins. > > Ok. Got it. > The current patch is discussion does not have word 'field'. > So current patch is good as-is. > Thanks. Agreed. ^ permalink raw reply [flat|nested] 10+ messages in thread
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