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From: Robert Hu <robert.hu@vmm.sh.intel.com>
To: Ian Jackson <Ian.Jackson@eu.citrix.com>, Ian.Campbell@citrix.com
Cc: robert.hu@intel.com, "longtao.pang" <longtaox.pang@intel.com>,
	wei.liu2@citrix.com, xen-devel@lists.xen.org
Subject: Re: [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 2/7] Parsing grub which has 'submenu' primitive
Date: Thu, 11 Jun 2015 11:17:45 +0800	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <1433992665.32731.6.camel@localhost> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <21880.15363.757545.925172@mariner.uk.xensource.com>

On Wed, 2015-06-10 at 14:30 +0100, Ian Jackson wrote:
> longtao.pang writes ("[OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 2/7] Parsing grub which has 'submenu' primitive"):
> > Now auto-gen kernel grub2 config file's boot menu entries can have
> > 2-level hierarchy, containing 'submenu' primitive, which is comprised by
> > several sub-menuentries. Xen boot entries are grouped into such kind of
> > 'submenu' block. This patch adds setupboot_grub2() ability to handle
> > such new grub.cfg format
> 
> Parsing submenus is good, but I have some style quibbles with your
> patch I'm afraid.
> 
> >          while (<$f>) {
> >              next if m/^\s*\#/ || !m/\S/;
> >              if (m/^\s*\}\s*$/) {
> > -                die unless $entry;
> > +                die unless $entry || $submenu;
> > +                if(!defined $entry && defined $submenu){
> 
> $entry and $submenu are either some ref, or undef, so you don't need
> `defined'.  You can just use them as if they were booleans in the if,
> just as you did above.  (I'm not sure that `!defined $entry' adds much
> given the previous line, but that's maybe a matter or taste.)
> 
> Missing spaces after if and inside `){'.
OK, to refine these.
> 
> > +                    logm("Met end of a submenu starting from ".
> > +                        "$submenu->{StartLine}. ".
> > +                        "Our want kern is $want_kernver");
> > +                    $submenu=undef;
> 
> Missing space after or around `='.  (Other places too.)
Wasn't aware of this rule. To refine this in next version patch.
> 
> > +                    pop @offsets;
> > +                    $offsets[$#offsets]++;
> > +                    next;
> > +                }
> >                  my (@missing) =
> >                      grep { !defined $entry->{$_} } 
> >  		        (defined $xenhopt
> > @@ -438,8 +448,12 @@ sub setupboot_grub2 ($$$$) {
> >              }
> >              if (m/^menuentry\s+[\'\"](.*)[\'\"].*\{\s*$/) {
> >                  die $entry->{StartLine} if $entry;
> > -                $entry= { Title => $1, StartLine => $., Number => $count };
> > -                $count++;
> > +                $entry= { Title => $1, StartLine => $., MenuEntryPath => join ">", @offsets };
> 
> Needs rewrapping.  Probably best to expand the { } into a multi-line
> structure.
OK, to divide it into 3 lines.
> 
> > +                $offsets[$#offsets]++;
> > +            }
> > +            if (m/^submenu\s+[\'\"](.*)[\'\"].*\{\s*$/) {
> > +                $submenu={ StartLine =>$., MenuEntryPath => join ">", @offsets };
> 
> Unless I'm mistaken, the MenuEntryPath of a $submenu is never used ?
> Not setting it would avoid (a) a need to rewrap and (b) me complaining
> that you have open-coded the join twice.
Actually this contribution from Ian Campbell.
Hi Ian C., would you agree if I simply remove the 'MenuEntryPath' here? 
> 
> Thanks,
> Ian.

  reply	other threads:[~2015-06-11  3:17 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 81+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2015-05-26  9:08 [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 0/7] Introduction of netsted HVM test job longtao.pang
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 1/7] grub: remove patch to disable submenu from 20_linux_xen overlay longtao.pang
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 2/7] Parsing grub which has 'submenu' primitive longtao.pang
2015-06-10 13:30   ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-11  3:17     ` Robert Hu [this message]
2015-06-11  8:37       ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-11  9:01         ` Robert Hu
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 3/7] Changes to support '/boot' leading paths of kernel, xen, in grub longtao.pang
2015-06-10 13:31   ` Ian Jackson
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 4/7] Changes on test step of Debian hvm guest install longtao.pang
2015-06-08 10:31   ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-09  5:29     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-09  8:07       ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-09  9:10         ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-10 13:41   ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-11  6:15     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-11 15:08       ` Ian Jackson
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 5/7] Add new script to customize nested test configuration longtao.pang
2015-06-10 13:58   ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-11  6:19     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-11 15:14       ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-12  3:46         ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-12  8:42           ` Ian Campbell
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 6/7] Compose the main recipe of nested test job longtao.pang
2015-06-10 15:42   ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-11  7:41     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-11  8:40       ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-11  9:52         ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-11 10:37           ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-11 15:19       ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-12  3:42         ` Robert Hu
2015-06-12  8:44           ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-12  9:00             ` Robert Hu
2015-06-12  9:15               ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-12  3:58         ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-12 15:27           ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-12 15:28             ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-14 12:52               ` Robert Hu
2015-06-14 12:51             ` Robert Hu
2015-06-15  9:08               ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-17  8:54                 ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-17  9:35                   ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-17 11:00                     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-17 11:48                       ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-18  9:16                         ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-18  9:22                           ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-18  9:26                             ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-17 11:31                     ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-25  8:21                     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-25  9:33                       ` Ian Campbell
2015-06-25 10:21                       ` Ian Jackson
2015-08-18  6:46                         ` Hu, Robert
2015-09-01 13:51                           ` Ian Campbell
2015-09-01 14:41                             ` Ian Jackson
2015-09-01 14:58                               ` Ian Campbell
2015-09-11  1:39                               ` Hu, Robert
2015-09-11 14:03                                 ` Ian Jackson
2015-09-11  1:39                             ` Hu, Robert
2015-06-17  9:08                 ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-19  3:03             ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-19 12:16               ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-19 12:17                 ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-30 16:36                   ` [OSSTEST RFC PATCH 0/4] Nested job execution infrastructure Ian Jackson
2015-06-30 16:36                     ` [OSSTEST PATCH 1/4] Tcl: Provide lunappend Ian Jackson
2015-06-30 16:36                     ` [OSSTEST PATCH 2/4] sg-run-job: Declare Tcl (for the benefit of Emacs) Ian Jackson
2015-06-30 16:36                     ` [OSSTEST PATCH 3/4] sg-run-job: Break out per-host-prep and per-host-finish Ian Jackson
2015-07-28  5:39                       ` Robert Hu
2015-07-28 15:15                         ` Ian Jackson
2015-07-29  8:13                           ` Robert Hu
2015-06-30 16:36                     ` [OSSTEST PATCH 4/4] sg-run-job: Provide infrastructure for layers of nesting Ian Jackson
2015-07-28  6:47                       ` Robert Hu
2015-07-28 15:13                         ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-30 16:56                     ` [OSSTEST RFC PATCH 0/4] Nested job execution infrastructure Ian Jackson
2015-07-01  1:56                     ` Robert Hu
2015-07-02 17:14                       ` Ian Jackson
2015-07-28  5:36                     ` Robert Hu
2015-05-26  9:08 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 7/7] Add test job for nest test case longtao.pang
2015-06-10 15:46   ` Ian Jackson
2015-06-11  6:28     ` Pang, LongtaoX
2015-06-11 15:16       ` Ian Jackson
2015-05-26 11:34 ` [OSSTEST Nested PATCH v11 0/7] Introduction of netsted HVM test job Ian Campbell

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