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From: michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com
To: docs@lists.yoctoproject.org
Cc: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>,
	Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
Subject: [PATCH 3/4] ref-manual: classes: kernel: remove incorrect sentence opening
Date: Tue,  9 May 2023 14:40:37 +0200	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <20230509124038.2265185-3-michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20230509124038.2265185-1-michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>

From: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>

From: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>

"This means that" implies that this sentence is a consequence of the
previous, but this is not the case, the two sentences being quite unrelated
to each other.

Signed-off-by: Luca Ceresoli <luca.ceresoli@bootlin.com>
Reviewed-by: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/classes.rst | 10 +++++-----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/classes.rst b/documentation/ref-manual/classes.rst
index a78368b380..de2d97de30 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/classes.rst
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/classes.rst
@@ -1532,11 +1532,11 @@ code to build all kernel trees. All needed headers are staged into the
 :term:`STAGING_KERNEL_DIR` directory to allow out-of-tree module builds
 using the :ref:`ref-classes-module` class.
 
-This means that each built kernel module is packaged separately and
-inter-module dependencies are created by parsing the ``modinfo`` output.
-If all modules are required, then installing the ``kernel-modules``
-package installs all packages with modules and various other kernel
-packages such as ``kernel-vmlinux``.
+Each built kernel module is packaged separately and inter-module
+dependencies are created by parsing the ``modinfo`` output.  If all modules
+are required, then installing the ``kernel-modules`` package installs all
+packages with modules and various other kernel packages such as
+``kernel-vmlinux``.
 
 The :ref:`ref-classes-kernel` class contains logic that allows you to embed an initial
 RAM filesystem (:term:`Initramfs`) image when you build the kernel image. For
-- 
2.34.1



  parent reply	other threads:[~2023-05-09 12:41 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-05-09 12:40 [PATCH 1/4] [mickledore] migration-guides: release-notes-4.2: add doc improvement highlights michael.opdenacker
2023-05-09 12:40 ` [PATCH 2/4] [mickledore] release-notes-4.2: update known issues and Repositories/Downloads michael.opdenacker
2023-05-09 12:40 ` michael.opdenacker [this message]
2023-05-09 12:40 ` [PATCH 4/4] ref-manual: classes: kernel: document automatic defconfig usage michael.opdenacker
     [not found] ` <175D7A12A151A6F9.26836@lists.yoctoproject.org>
2023-05-09 12:45   ` [docs] " Michael Opdenacker

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