From: Michael Opdenacker <michael.opdenacker@bootlin.com>
To: Paul Eggleton <bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
Cc: docs@lists.yoctoproject.org
Subject: Re: [docs] [PATCH 05/12] release-notes-4.3: tweaks to existing text
Date: Mon, 6 Nov 2023 17:55:12 +0100 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <cd2309ce-7175-4da6-809f-58dd6c64779b@bootlin.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <d4318080dc94fe426323c4505f93617c235d1f6e.1699266393.git.bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
Hi Paul
On 06.11.23 at 11:29, Paul Eggleton wrote:
> A few grammar tweaks.
>
> Signed-off-by: Paul Eggleton <bluelightning@bluelightning.org>
> ---
> documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst | 7 ++++---
> 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> index 2f20fcb6946..dd61a9c8e41 100644
> --- a/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> +++ b/documentation/migration-guides/release-notes-4.3.rst
> @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ New Features / Enhancements in 4.3
>
> - `ttyrun <https://github.com/ibm-s390-linux/s390-tools>`__, starts
> ``getty`` programs only when a terminal exists, preventing respawns
> - through the ``init`` program. This allowed to remove the
> + through the ``init`` program. This enabled removing the
Oops, I guess it's not the first time I make this mistake.
I show pay extra attention every time I feeling like using the "allow"
verb :)
https://letlucyedit.wordpress.com/2013/04/03/enable-or-allow-why-you-need-to-get-it-right/
Many thanks!
Michael.
--
Michael Opdenacker, Bootlin
Embedded Linux and Kernel engineering
https://bootlin.com
next prev parent reply other threads:[~2023-11-06 16:55 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 21+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2023-11-06 10:29 [PATCH 00/12] 4.3 release documentation Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 01/12] Remove references to apm in MACHINE_FEATURES Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 02/12] ref-manual: update SDK_NAME variable documentation Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 03/12] ref-manual: remove semicolons from *PROCESS_COMMAND variables Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 04/12] release-notes-4.3: fix some typos Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 05/12] release-notes-4.3: tweaks to existing text Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 16:55 ` Michael Opdenacker [this message]
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 06/12] release-notes-4.3: add CVEs, recipe upgrades, license changes, contributors Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 17:07 ` [docs] " Michael Opdenacker
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 07/12] release-notes-4.3: remove the Distribution section Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 08/12] release-notes-4.3: move new classes to Rust section Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 09/12] release-notes-4.3: feature additions Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:45 ` [docs] " Ulrich Ölmann
2023-11-06 16:14 ` Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 10/12] migration-4.3: remove some unnecessary items Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 11/12] migration-4.3: adjustments to existing text Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:29 ` [PATCH 12/12] migration-4.3: additional migration items Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 10:58 ` [docs] " Ulrich Ölmann
2023-11-06 16:16 ` Paul Eggleton
2023-11-06 20:45 ` Michael Opdenacker
2023-11-06 10:45 ` [PATCH 00/12] 4.3 release documentation Michael Opdenacker
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