Re: [virtio-comment] Duplicated text - Section 5.2.6.4 - version 1.1 draft 01

["Michael S. Tsirkin" <mst@redhat.com>]

On Tue, Mar 05, 2019 at 04:15:00PM +0000, Savir, Gil wrote:
> In version 1.1 draft 01 - Section 5.2.6.4 - second bullet:
> 
> Duplicated text "errors, data_len, sense_len and residual MUST reside in a single, separate device-writable descriptor" appears both in the beginning and at the end of the 2nd sentence.
> 
> The original text:
> * For SCSI commands there are additional constraints. errors, data_len, sense_len and residual MUST reside in a single, separate device-writable descriptor, sense MUST reside in a single separate devicewritable descriptor of size 96 bytes, and errors, data_len, sense_len and residual MUST reside a single separate device-writable descriptor.
> 
> I suggest to delete the 1st one, so in the end result, fields are described in same order as appear in struct virtio_scsi_pc_req.
> 
> Thanks,
> Gil Savir
> 


Thanks for the report!
I saved this defect as
https://github.com/oasis-tcs/virtio-spec/issues/39


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