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* [PATCH 0/6] Fix various comment errors
@ 2019-12-11  6:26 linmiaohe
  2019-12-11  6:26 ` [PATCH 1/6] KVM: Fix some wrong function names in comment linmiaohe
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  0 siblings, 8 replies; 12+ messages in thread
From: linmiaohe @ 2019-12-11  6:26 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: pbonzini, rkrcmar, sean.j.christopherson, vkuznets, wanpengli,
	jmattson, joro, tglx, mingo, bp, hpa
  Cc: linmiaohe, kvm, linux-kernel, x86

From: Miaohe Lin <linmiaohe@huawei.com>

Fix various comment mistakes, such as typo, grammar mistake, out-dated
function name, writing error and so on. It is a bit tedious and many
thanks for review in advance.

Miaohe Lin (6):
  KVM: Fix some wrong function names in comment
  KVM: Fix some out-dated function names in comment
  KVM: Fix some comment typos and missing parentheses
  KVM: Fix some grammar mistakes
  KVM: hyperv: Fix some typos in vcpu unimpl info
  KVM: Fix some writing mistakes

 arch/x86/include/asm/kvm_host.h       | 2 +-
 arch/x86/kvm/hyperv.c                 | 6 +++---
 arch/x86/kvm/ioapic.c                 | 2 +-
 arch/x86/kvm/lapic.c                  | 4 ++--
 arch/x86/kvm/vmx/nested.c             | 2 +-
 arch/x86/kvm/vmx/vmcs_shadow_fields.h | 4 ++--
 arch/x86/kvm/vmx/vmx.c                | 8 ++++----
 virt/kvm/kvm_main.c                   | 6 +++---
 8 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

-- 
2.19.1


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* Re: [PATCH 6/6] KVM: Fix some writing mistakes
@ 2019-12-12  2:02 linmiaohe
  0 siblings, 0 replies; 12+ messages in thread
From: linmiaohe @ 2019-12-12  2:02 UTC (permalink / raw)
  To: Sean Christopherson
  Cc: pbonzini@redhat.com, rkrcmar@redhat.com, vkuznets@redhat.com,
	wanpengli@tencent.com, jmattson@google.com, joro@8bytes.org,
	tglx@linutronix.de, mingo@redhat.com, bp@alien8.de, hpa@zytor.com,
	kvm@vger.kernel.org, linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org, x86@kernel.org

Sean Christopherson wrote:
>On Wed, Dec 11, 2019 at 02:26:25PM +0800, linmiaohe wrote:
>> From: Miaohe Lin <linmiaohe@huawei.com>
>> 
>> Fix some writing mistakes in the comments.
>> 
>> Signed-off-by: Miaohe Lin <linmiaohe@huawei.com>
>> ---
>>  	 * This context will save all necessary information to walk page tables
>> -	 * of the an L2 guest. This context is only initialized for page table
>> +	 * of the L2 guest. This context is only initialized for page table
>
>I'd whack "the" instead of "and", i.e. ...walk page tables of an L2 guest, as KVM isn't limited to just one L2 guest.

I'd change this.

>>  	 * walking and not for faulting since we never handle l2 page faults 
>> on
>
>While you're here, want to change "l2" to "L2"?

I do nothing here. :)

>>  	 * the host.
>>  	 */
>> check_user_page_hwpoison(unsigned long addr)
>>  /*
>>   * The fast path to get the writable pfn which will be stored in @pfn,
>>   * true indicates success, otherwise false is returned.  It's also 
>> the
>> - * only part that runs if we can are in atomic context.
>> + * only part that runs if we can in atomic context.
>
>This should remove "can" instead of "are", i.e. ...part that runs if we are in atomic context.  The comment is calling out that hva_to_pfn() will return immediately if hva_to_pfn_fast() and the kernel is atomic context.
>

Many thanks for your explanation, I would change this too. And many thanks for your review.

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