Re: [PATCH v2 03/14] vfio: Split creation of a vfio_device into init and register ops

[Jason Gunthorpe <jgg@nvidia.com>]

On Tue, Mar 16, 2021 at 03:13:06PM -0600, Alex Williamson wrote:

> > > +	void vfio_init_group_dev(struct vfio_device *device,
> > > +				struct device *dev,
> > > +				const struct vfio_device_ops *ops,
> > > +				void *device_data);
> > > +	int vfio_register_group_dev(struct vfio_device *device);
> > > +	void vfio_unregister_group_dev(struct vfio_device *device);
> > > +
> > > +The driver should embed the vfio_device in its own structure and call
> > > +vfio_init_group_dev() to pre-configure it before going to registration.  
> > 
> > s/it/that structure/ (I guess?)
> 
> Seems less clear actually, is the object of "that structure" the
> "vfio_device" or "its own structure".  Phrasing somewhat suggests the
> latter.  s/it/the vfio_device structure/ seems excessively verbose.  I
> think "it" is probably sufficient here.  Thanks,

Right, it says directly above that vfio_init_group_dev() accepts a
vfio_device so I doubt anyone will be confused for long on what "it"
refers to.

I got the other language fixes thanks

Jason