From: Glenn Washburn <development@efficientek.com>
To: The development of GNU GRUB <grub-devel@gnu.org>,
Daniel Kiper <daniel.kiper@oracle.com>
Cc: Andrew Hamilton <adhamilt@gmail.com>,
Glenn Washburn <development@efficientek.com>
Subject: [PATCH] docs: Fix incorrect and potentially confusing language and minor formatting
Date: Thu, 5 Sep 2024 20:37:11 -0500 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240906013711.375113-1-development@efficientek.com> (raw)
Signed-off-by: Glenn Washburn <development@efficientek.com>
---
docs/grub.texi | 15 +++++++--------
1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
diff --git a/docs/grub.texi b/docs/grub.texi
index 63e796a3a738..e6e5efa05e6c 100644
--- a/docs/grub.texi
+++ b/docs/grub.texi
@@ -4538,11 +4538,12 @@ files.
@node emunet_module
@section emunet
-This module provides support for an emulated network card in GRUB.
+This module provides support for networking in GRUB on the emu platform.
@node emupci_module
@section emupci
-This module provides support for an emulated PCI bus in GRUB.
+This module provides support for accessing the PCI bus in GRUB on the emu
+platform.
@node erofs_module
@section erofs
@@ -4784,8 +4785,8 @@ image support, and icon support.
@node gfxterm_module
@section gfxterm
-This module provides support for displaying a graphical terminal interface from
-GRUB.
+This module provides support for displaying a terminal and menu interface from
+GRUB using graphics mode.
@node gfxterm_background_module
@section gfxterm_background
@@ -5105,8 +5106,7 @@ at the time of writing.
@node memdisk_module
@section memdisk
This module provides support for a memdisk device. A memdisk is a memory mapped
-emulated disk likely only possible in legacy environment such as with a legacy
-BIOS operating in 16-bit mode.
+emulated disk.
@node memrw_module
@section memrw
@@ -5475,8 +5475,7 @@ like interface to some GRUB internal data.
@node progress_module
@section progress
-This module provides support for showing file loading progress to the
-terminal.
+This module provides support for showing file loading progress to the terminal.
@node pxe_module
@section pxe
--
2.34.1
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2024-09-06 1:37 Glenn Washburn [this message]
2024-09-06 2:12 ` [PATCH] docs: Fix incorrect and potentially confusing language and minor formatting Andrew Hamilton
2024-09-06 2:56 ` Vladimir 'phcoder' Serbinenko
2024-11-08 19:07 ` Glenn Washburn
2024-11-12 16:00 ` Daniel Kiper
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