Slight improvement in readability

Slight improvement in readability

[Vyshnav Ajith]

Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"

Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644
--- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
+++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
@@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
 
   Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines?
   It's probably the former.  If you find yourself craving more bandwidth,
-  and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
+  and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
   together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your
-  bandwidth.  All without having to have a special black box on either
+  bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either
   side.
 
 
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
   the load across two or more Cirrus chips.
 
   The good news is that one gets nearly the full advantage of the
-  second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth.  (The bad news is
+  second, third, and fourth line's bandwidth. (The bad news is
   that the connection establishment seemed fragile for the higher
   speeds.  Once established, the connection seemed robust enough.)
 
-- 
2.43.0

Re: Slight improvement in readability

[Jonathan Corbet]

Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com> writes:

> Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"
>
> Signed-off-by: Vyshnav Ajith <puthen1977@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/networking/eql.rst | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> index a628c4c81166..4f47121323c9 100644
> --- a/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/networking/eql.rst
> @@ -23,9 +23,9 @@ EQL Driver: Serial IP Load Balancing HOWTO
>  
>    Which is worse? A huge fee for a 56K leased line or two phone lines?
>    It's probably the former.  If you find yourself craving more bandwidth,
> -  and have a ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
> +  and have an ISP that is flexible, it is now possible to bind modems
>    together to work as one point-to-point link to increase your
> -  bandwidth.  All without having to have a special black box on either
> +  bandwidth. All without having to have a special black box on either

Grammar fixes are fine, but we have an explicit policy that certain
things are *not* typos and do not need fixing.  These include American
or British spellings and, to the point here, the number of spaces after
a period.  Please do not submit that kind of change.

Thanks,

jon

Re: Slight improvement in readability

[Matthew Wilcox]

On Fri, Nov 22, 2024 at 04:16:04AM +0530, Vyshnav Ajith wrote:
> Removed few extra spaces and changed from "a" to "an ISP"

Two spaces afer a period is correct.  Please do not "fix" this.