[PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors

[PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors

[hariconscious]

From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>

kdump.rst documentation typos corrected

Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
---
 Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
--- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
+++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
 Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
 
 Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
-it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
+it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
 reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
 kernel if corruption happens.
 
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ Kernel parameter
 
 Through the kernel parameters below, memory can be reserved accordingly
 during the early stage of the first kernel booting so that a continuous
-large chunk of memomy can be found. The low memory reservation needs to
+large chunk of memory can be found. The low memory reservation needs to
 be considered if the crashkernel is reserved from the high memory area.
 
 - crashkernel=size@offset
-- 
2.43.0

Re: [PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors

[Jonathan Corbet]

hariconscious@gmail.com writes:

> From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
>
> kdump.rst documentation typos corrected
>
> Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
> --- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
>  Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
>  
>  Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
> -it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
> +it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
>  reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
>  kernel if corruption happens.

I don't think this is right.  While reserving judgment on
"preliminarily" as a word, the intended use is adverbial, so this change
does not make things better.  The better fix, perhaps, is to say
"previously" instead.

Should you choose to resubmit this, we'll need your real name in the
Signed-off-by tag, please.

Thanks,

jon

Re: [PATCH] documentation/arm64 : kdump fixed typo errors

[hariconscious]

hariconscious@gmail.com writes:

> From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
>
> kdump.rst documentation typos corrected
>
> Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
> --- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
>  Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
>  
>  Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
> -it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
> +it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
>  reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
>  kernel if corruption happens.

I don't think this is right.  While reserving judgment on
"preliminarily" as a word, the intended use is adverbial, so this change
does not make things better.  The better fix, perhaps, is to say
"previously" instead.

Should you choose to resubmit this, we'll need your real name in the
Signed-off-by tag, please.

Thanks,

jon

Hi Jon,

Good day.
Thanks for the suggestion, will correct and send the patch again.
And my real name is "HariKrishna" and see that it is mentioned in Signed-off-by tag.
Do I need to add surname as well ? Please let me know.

Thank you.
HariKrishna.

(no subject)

[hariconscious]

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hariconscious@gmail.com writes:

> From: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
>
> kdump.rst documentation typos corrected
>
> Signed-off-by: HariKrishna <hariconscious@gmail.com>
> ---
>  Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst | 4 ++--
>  1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> index 56a89f45df28..d3195a93a066 100644
> --- a/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/arch/arm64/kdump.rst
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ crashkernel memory reservation on arm64
>  Author: Baoquan He <bhe@redhat.com>
>  
>  Kdump mechanism is used to capture a corrupted kernel vmcore so that
> -it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminarily
> +it can be subsequently analyzed. In order to do this, a preliminary
>  reserved memory is needed to pre-load the kdump kernel and boot such
>  kernel if corruption happens.

I don't think this is right.  While reserving judgment on
"preliminarily" as a word, the intended use is adverbial, so this change
does not make things better.  The better fix, perhaps, is to say
"previously" instead.

Should you choose to resubmit this, we'll need your real name in the
Signed-off-by tag, please.

Thanks,

jon

Hi Jon,

Good day.
Thanks for the suggestion, will correct and send the patch again.
And my real name is "HariKrishna" and see that it is mentioned in Signed-off-by tag.
Do I need to add surname as well ? Please let me know.

Thank you.
HariKrishna.

Re:

[Jonathan Corbet]

hariconscious@gmail.com writes:

> Thanks for the suggestion, will correct and send the patch again.
> And my real name is "HariKrishna" and see that it is mentioned in Signed-off-by tag.
> Do I need to add surname as well ? Please let me know.

Yes, signoffs should give your full name.

Thanks,

jon