Re: [PATCH DOCDAY] docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown

[Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>]

On 26/03/12 12:03, Ian Campbell wrote:
> # HG changeset patch
> # User Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>
> # Date 1332759819 -3600
> # Node ID baf42727ac60228328abc21b96cc286a48a73ce9
> # Parent  7b59ec903645dffd6f0e07ba8428ef540bc268d4
> docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown
>
> Run a spell checker over the doc and fix the typos and spelling it uncovers
> (including a few I just added myself).
>
> Signed-off-by: Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>

Acked-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>

> diff -r 7b59ec903645 -r baf42727ac60 docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown
> --- a/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown	Mon Mar 26 10:38:53 2012 +0100
> +++ b/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown	Mon Mar 26 12:03:39 2012 +0100
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
>    arch trees, and some options are currently separate from their
>    legacy versions.  Please remove this notice when complete.**
>  
> -This document coveres the command line options which the Xen
> +This document covers the command line options which the Xen
>  Hypervisor.
>  
>  ## Types of parameter
> @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Enable synchronous console mode
>  ### Integer (`<integer>`)
>  
>  An integer parameter will default to decimal and may be prefixed with
> -a `-` for negative numbers.  Alternativly, a hexidecimal number may be
> +a `-` for negative numbers.  Alternatively, a hexadecimal number may be
>  used by prefixing the number with `0x`, or an octal number may be used
>  if a leading `0` is present.
>  
> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Without a size suffix, the default will 
>  ### String
>  
>  Many parameters are more complicated and require more intricate
> -configuration.  The detailed description of each individual paramter
> +configuration.  The detailed description of each individual parameter
>  specify which values are valid.
>  
>  ### List
> @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ from the MP tables.
>  Finally, any of the boolean false options can be used to disable ACPI
>  usage entirely.
>  
> -Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> +Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
>  the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
>  domain 0 command line
>  
> @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ than one is present.
>  
>  Instruct Xen to ignore timer-interrupt override.
>  
> -Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> +Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
>  the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
>  domain 0 command line
>  
> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Both option `com1` and `com2` follow the
>  * `pci` indicates that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
>    avoiding Intel AMT devices.
>  * `amt` indicated that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
> -  including Intel AMT devices if presetn.
> +  including Intel AMT devices if present.
>  
>  A typical setup for most situations might be `com1=115200,8n1`
>  
> @@ -200,10 +200,10 @@ Specify which console(s) Xen should use.
>  `vga` indicates that Xen should try and use the vga graphics adapter.
>  
>  `com1` and `com2` indicates that Xen should use serial ports 1 and 2
> -respectivly.  Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
> +respectively.  Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
>  `L`.  `H` indicates that transmitted characters will have their MSB
> -set, while recieved characters must have their MSB set.  `L` indicates
> -the converse; transmitted and recieved characters will have their MSB
> +set, while received characters must have their MSB set.  `L` indicates
> +the converse; transmitted and received characters will have their MSB
>  cleared.  This allows a single port to be shared by two subsystems
>  (e.g. console and debugger).
>  
> @@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ console during dom0 boot.
>  
>  > Default: `4G`
>  
> -Specify the maximum address to allocate certain strucutres, if used in
> +Specify the maximum address to allocate certain structures, if used in
>  combination with the `low_crashinfo` command line option.
>  
>  ### crashkernel
> @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Specify the bit width of the DMA heap.
>  ### dom0\_max\_vcpus
>  > `= <integer>`
>  
> -Specifiy the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0.  This defaults
> +Specify the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0.  This defaults
>  to the number of pcpus on the host.
>  
>  ### dom0\_mem (ia64)
> @@ -345,7 +345,9 @@ Increase the number of PIRQs available f
>  Set the logging level for Xen guests.  Any log message with equal more
>  more importance will be printed.
>  
> -The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities should be rate limited.
> +The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
> +should be rate limited.
> +
>  ### hap\_1gb
>  ### hap\_2mb
>  ### hpetbroadcast
> @@ -373,7 +375,7 @@ all.
>  Set the logging level for Xen.  Any log message with equal more more
>  importance will be printed.
>  
> -The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities
> +The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
>  should be rate limited.
>  
>  ### low\_crashinfo
> @@ -383,7 +385,7 @@ should be rate limited.
>  
>  This option is only useful for hosts with a 32bit dom0 kernel, wishing
>  to use kexec functionality in the case of a crash.  It represents
> -which data structures should be deliberatly allocated in low memory,
> +which data structures should be deliberately allocated in low memory,
>  so the crash kernel may find find them.  Should be used in combination
>  with `crashinfo_maxaddr`.
>  
> @@ -416,7 +418,7 @@ Instruct Xen to ignore any IOAPICs that 
>  instead continue to use the legacy PIC. This is _not_ recommended with
>  pvops type kernels.
>  
> -Because responsiblity for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
> +Because responsibility for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
>  domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the domain
>  0 command line.
>  
> @@ -474,7 +476,7 @@ Choose the default scheduler.
>  ### serial\_tx\_buffer
>  > `= <size>`
>  
> -Set the serial tramsit buffer size.  Defaults to 16kB.
> +Set the serial transmit buffer size.  Defaults to 16kB.
>  
>  ### smep
>  ### snb\_igd\_quirk
> @@ -526,7 +528,7 @@ with the specified width, height and dep
>  
>  `mode-<mode>` instructs Xen to use a specific mode, as shown with the
>  `ask` option.  (N.B menu modes are displayed in hex, so `<mode>`
> -should be a hexidecimal number)
> +should be a hexadecimal number)
>  
>  The optional `keep` parameter causes Xen to continue using the vga
>  console even after dom0 has been started.  The default behaviour is to

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