* [PATCH DOCDAY] docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown
@ 2012-03-26 11:03 Ian Campbell
2012-03-26 14:36 ` Andrew Cooper
0 siblings, 1 reply; 2+ messages in thread
From: Ian Campbell @ 2012-03-26 11:03 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: xen-devel; +Cc: Andrew.Cooper3, Ian Jackson
# HG changeset patch
# User Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>
# Date 1332759819 -3600
# Node ID baf42727ac60228328abc21b96cc286a48a73ce9
# Parent 7b59ec903645dffd6f0e07ba8428ef540bc268d4
docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown
Run a spell checker over the doc and fix the typos and spelling it uncovers
(including a few I just added myself).
Signed-off-by: Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>
diff -r 7b59ec903645 -r baf42727ac60 docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown
--- a/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown Mon Mar 26 10:38:53 2012 +0100
+++ b/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown Mon Mar 26 12:03:39 2012 +0100
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
arch trees, and some options are currently separate from their
legacy versions. Please remove this notice when complete.**
-This document coveres the command line options which the Xen
+This document covers the command line options which the Xen
Hypervisor.
## Types of parameter
@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Enable synchronous console mode
### Integer (`<integer>`)
An integer parameter will default to decimal and may be prefixed with
-a `-` for negative numbers. Alternativly, a hexidecimal number may be
+a `-` for negative numbers. Alternatively, a hexadecimal number may be
used by prefixing the number with `0x`, or an octal number may be used
if a leading `0` is present.
@@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Without a size suffix, the default will
### String
Many parameters are more complicated and require more intricate
-configuration. The detailed description of each individual paramter
+configuration. The detailed description of each individual parameter
specify which values are valid.
### List
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ from the MP tables.
Finally, any of the boolean false options can be used to disable ACPI
usage entirely.
-Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
+Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
domain 0 command line
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ than one is present.
Instruct Xen to ignore timer-interrupt override.
-Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
+Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
domain 0 command line
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Both option `com1` and `com2` follow the
* `pci` indicates that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
avoiding Intel AMT devices.
* `amt` indicated that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
- including Intel AMT devices if presetn.
+ including Intel AMT devices if present.
A typical setup for most situations might be `com1=115200,8n1`
@@ -200,10 +200,10 @@ Specify which console(s) Xen should use.
`vga` indicates that Xen should try and use the vga graphics adapter.
`com1` and `com2` indicates that Xen should use serial ports 1 and 2
-respectivly. Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
+respectively. Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
`L`. `H` indicates that transmitted characters will have their MSB
-set, while recieved characters must have their MSB set. `L` indicates
-the converse; transmitted and recieved characters will have their MSB
+set, while received characters must have their MSB set. `L` indicates
+the converse; transmitted and received characters will have their MSB
cleared. This allows a single port to be shared by two subsystems
(e.g. console and debugger).
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ console during dom0 boot.
> Default: `4G`
-Specify the maximum address to allocate certain strucutres, if used in
+Specify the maximum address to allocate certain structures, if used in
combination with the `low_crashinfo` command line option.
### crashkernel
@@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Specify the bit width of the DMA heap.
### dom0\_max\_vcpus
> `= <integer>`
-Specifiy the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0. This defaults
+Specify the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0. This defaults
to the number of pcpus on the host.
### dom0\_mem (ia64)
@@ -345,7 +345,9 @@ Increase the number of PIRQs available f
Set the logging level for Xen guests. Any log message with equal more
more importance will be printed.
-The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities should be rate limited.
+The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
+should be rate limited.
+
### hap\_1gb
### hap\_2mb
### hpetbroadcast
@@ -373,7 +375,7 @@ all.
Set the logging level for Xen. Any log message with equal more more
importance will be printed.
-The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities
+The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
should be rate limited.
### low\_crashinfo
@@ -383,7 +385,7 @@ should be rate limited.
This option is only useful for hosts with a 32bit dom0 kernel, wishing
to use kexec functionality in the case of a crash. It represents
-which data structures should be deliberatly allocated in low memory,
+which data structures should be deliberately allocated in low memory,
so the crash kernel may find find them. Should be used in combination
with `crashinfo_maxaddr`.
@@ -416,7 +418,7 @@ Instruct Xen to ignore any IOAPICs that
instead continue to use the legacy PIC. This is _not_ recommended with
pvops type kernels.
-Because responsiblity for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
+Because responsibility for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the domain
0 command line.
@@ -474,7 +476,7 @@ Choose the default scheduler.
### serial\_tx\_buffer
> `= <size>`
-Set the serial tramsit buffer size. Defaults to 16kB.
+Set the serial transmit buffer size. Defaults to 16kB.
### smep
### snb\_igd\_quirk
@@ -526,7 +528,7 @@ with the specified width, height and dep
`mode-<mode>` instructs Xen to use a specific mode, as shown with the
`ask` option. (N.B menu modes are displayed in hex, so `<mode>`
-should be a hexidecimal number)
+should be a hexadecimal number)
The optional `keep` parameter causes Xen to continue using the vga
console even after dom0 has been started. The default behaviour is to
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* Re: [PATCH DOCDAY] docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown
2012-03-26 11:03 [PATCH DOCDAY] docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown Ian Campbell
@ 2012-03-26 14:36 ` Andrew Cooper
0 siblings, 0 replies; 2+ messages in thread
From: Andrew Cooper @ 2012-03-26 14:36 UTC (permalink / raw)
To: Ian Campbell; +Cc: Ian Jackson, xen-devel@lists.xen.org
On 26/03/12 12:03, Ian Campbell wrote:
> # HG changeset patch
> # User Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>
> # Date 1332759819 -3600
> # Node ID baf42727ac60228328abc21b96cc286a48a73ce9
> # Parent 7b59ec903645dffd6f0e07ba8428ef540bc268d4
> docs: spelling and typoes in misc/xen-command-line.markdown
>
> Run a spell checker over the doc and fix the typos and spelling it uncovers
> (including a few I just added myself).
>
> Signed-off-by: Ian Campbell <ian.campbell@citrix.com>
Acked-by: Andrew Cooper <andrew.cooper3@citrix.com>
> diff -r 7b59ec903645 -r baf42727ac60 docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown
> --- a/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown Mon Mar 26 10:38:53 2012 +0100
> +++ b/docs/misc/xen-command-line.markdown Mon Mar 26 12:03:39 2012 +0100
> @@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
> arch trees, and some options are currently separate from their
> legacy versions. Please remove this notice when complete.**
>
> -This document coveres the command line options which the Xen
> +This document covers the command line options which the Xen
> Hypervisor.
>
> ## Types of parameter
> @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ Enable synchronous console mode
> ### Integer (`<integer>`)
>
> An integer parameter will default to decimal and may be prefixed with
> -a `-` for negative numbers. Alternativly, a hexidecimal number may be
> +a `-` for negative numbers. Alternatively, a hexadecimal number may be
> used by prefixing the number with `0x`, or an octal number may be used
> if a leading `0` is present.
>
> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ Without a size suffix, the default will
> ### String
>
> Many parameters are more complicated and require more intricate
> -configuration. The detailed description of each individual paramter
> +configuration. The detailed description of each individual parameter
> specify which values are valid.
>
> ### List
> @@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ from the MP tables.
> Finally, any of the boolean false options can be used to disable ACPI
> usage entirely.
>
> -Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> +Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
> domain 0 command line
>
> @@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ than one is present.
>
> Instruct Xen to ignore timer-interrupt override.
>
> -Because responsiblity for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> +Because responsibility for ACPI processing is shared between Xen and
> the domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the
> domain 0 command line
>
> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Both option `com1` and `com2` follow the
> * `pci` indicates that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
> avoiding Intel AMT devices.
> * `amt` indicated that Xen should scan the PCI bus for the UART,
> - including Intel AMT devices if presetn.
> + including Intel AMT devices if present.
>
> A typical setup for most situations might be `com1=115200,8n1`
>
> @@ -200,10 +200,10 @@ Specify which console(s) Xen should use.
> `vga` indicates that Xen should try and use the vga graphics adapter.
>
> `com1` and `com2` indicates that Xen should use serial ports 1 and 2
> -respectivly. Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
> +respectively. Optionally, these arguments may be followed by an `H` or
> `L`. `H` indicates that transmitted characters will have their MSB
> -set, while recieved characters must have their MSB set. `L` indicates
> -the converse; transmitted and recieved characters will have their MSB
> +set, while received characters must have their MSB set. `L` indicates
> +the converse; transmitted and received characters will have their MSB
> cleared. This allows a single port to be shared by two subsystems
> (e.g. console and debugger).
>
> @@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ console during dom0 boot.
>
> > Default: `4G`
>
> -Specify the maximum address to allocate certain strucutres, if used in
> +Specify the maximum address to allocate certain structures, if used in
> combination with the `low_crashinfo` command line option.
>
> ### crashkernel
> @@ -274,7 +274,7 @@ Specify the bit width of the DMA heap.
> ### dom0\_max\_vcpus
> > `= <integer>`
>
> -Specifiy the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0. This defaults
> +Specify the maximum number of vcpus to give to dom0. This defaults
> to the number of pcpus on the host.
>
> ### dom0\_mem (ia64)
> @@ -345,7 +345,9 @@ Increase the number of PIRQs available f
> Set the logging level for Xen guests. Any log message with equal more
> more importance will be printed.
>
> -The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities should be rate limited.
> +The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
> +should be rate limited.
> +
> ### hap\_1gb
> ### hap\_2mb
> ### hpetbroadcast
> @@ -373,7 +375,7 @@ all.
> Set the logging level for Xen. Any log message with equal more more
> importance will be printed.
>
> -The optional `<rate-limited level>` options instructs which severities
> +The optional `<rate-limited level>` option instructs which severities
> should be rate limited.
>
> ### low\_crashinfo
> @@ -383,7 +385,7 @@ should be rate limited.
>
> This option is only useful for hosts with a 32bit dom0 kernel, wishing
> to use kexec functionality in the case of a crash. It represents
> -which data structures should be deliberatly allocated in low memory,
> +which data structures should be deliberately allocated in low memory,
> so the crash kernel may find find them. Should be used in combination
> with `crashinfo_maxaddr`.
>
> @@ -416,7 +418,7 @@ Instruct Xen to ignore any IOAPICs that
> instead continue to use the legacy PIC. This is _not_ recommended with
> pvops type kernels.
>
> -Because responsiblity for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
> +Because responsibility for APIC setup is shared between Xen and the
> domain 0 kernel this option is automatically propagated to the domain
> 0 command line.
>
> @@ -474,7 +476,7 @@ Choose the default scheduler.
> ### serial\_tx\_buffer
> > `= <size>`
>
> -Set the serial tramsit buffer size. Defaults to 16kB.
> +Set the serial transmit buffer size. Defaults to 16kB.
>
> ### smep
> ### snb\_igd\_quirk
> @@ -526,7 +528,7 @@ with the specified width, height and dep
>
> `mode-<mode>` instructs Xen to use a specific mode, as shown with the
> `ask` option. (N.B menu modes are displayed in hex, so `<mode>`
> -should be a hexidecimal number)
> +should be a hexadecimal number)
>
> The optional `keep` parameter causes Xen to continue using the vga
> console even after dom0 has been started. The default behaviour is to
--
Andrew Cooper - Dom0 Kernel Engineer, Citrix XenServer
T: +44 (0)1223 225 900, http://www.citrix.com
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