From: Ben Aveling <bena.001@optusnet.com.au>
To: Chris Packham <judge.packham@gmail.com>,
Jeremiah Mahler <jmmahler@gmail.com>,
git@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary
Date: Mon, 26 May 2014 18:11:43 +1000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <5382F73F.2010704@optusnet.com.au> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <5382F237.8070909@gmail.com>
On 25/05/14 20:37, Jeremiah Mahler wrote:
>> How about this:
>>
>> Eventually the upstream developer will do additional work in their
>> repository. Creating new commits and advancing the branches to point
>> at the new commits.
>
The second sentence needs a verb. Maybe something along the lines of
"When they ${do_X}, ${Y} will happen" ?
Regards, Ben
prev parent reply other threads:[~2014-05-26 8:37 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 5+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2014-05-25 3:50 [PATCH] wording fixes in the user manual and glossary Jeremiah Mahler
2014-05-25 7:56 ` Chris Packham
2014-05-25 8:37 ` Jeremiah Mahler
2014-05-26 7:50 ` Chris Packham
2014-05-26 8:11 ` Ben Aveling [this message]
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