[virtio-comment] [PATCH v2 0/1] Fix missing verb and typos

[virtio-comment] [PATCH v2 0/1] Fix missing verb and typos

[Gaetan Harter]

From: Gaetan Harter <gaetan.harter@opensynergy.com>

Changes from v1:
 - Added suggested "that"
 - Updated commit message to mention "conjunction" and be plural.

Gaëtan Harter(1):
  virtio-crypto: fix missing conjunction and verb

 virtio-crypto.tex | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)


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[virtio-comment] [PATCH v2 1/1] virtio-crypto: fix missing conjunction and verb

[Gaetan Harter]

The condition sentences were incomplete:
"guarantee THAT the size IS within the max_len".

Signed-off-by: Gaetan Harter <gaetan.harter@opensynergy.com>
---
 virtio-crypto.tex | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/virtio-crypto.tex b/virtio-crypto.tex
index 4a15e14..74746f9 100644
--- a/virtio-crypto.tex
+++ b/virtio-crypto.tex
@@ -275,13 +275,13 @@ \subsection{Device configuration layout}\label{sec:Device Types / Crypto Device
 \item The driver MUST read the detailed algorithms fields based on \field{crypto_services} field.
 \item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_size} to discover the maximum size of the variable-length
     parameters of data operation of the crypto request's content the device supports and MUST
-    guarantee the size of each crypto request's content within the \field{max_size}, otherwise
+    guarantee that the size of each crypto request's content is within the \field{max_size}, otherwise
     the request will fail and the driver MUST reset the device.
 \item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_cipher_key_len} to discover the maximum length of cipher key
-    the device supports and MUST guarantee the \field{key_len} (CIPHER service or AEAD service) within
+    the device supports and MUST guarantee that the \field{key_len} (CIPHER service or AEAD service) is within
     the \field{max_cipher_key_len} of the device configuration, otherwise the request will fail.
 \item The driver SHOULD read \field{max_auth_key_len} to discover the maximum length of authenticated
-    key the device supports and MUST guarantee the \field{auth_key_len} (MAC service) within the
+    key the device supports and MUST guarantee that the \field{auth_key_len} (MAC service) is within the
     \field{max_auth_key_len} of the device configuration, otherwise the request will fail.
 \end{itemize*}

--
2.25.1


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Re: [virtio-comment] [PATCH v2 1/1] virtio-crypto: fix missing conjunction and verb

[Cornelia Huck]

On Tue, Jul 27 2021, Gaetan Harter <gaetan.harter@opensynergy.com> wrote:

> The condition sentences were incomplete:
> "guarantee THAT the size IS within the max_len".
>
> Signed-off-by: Gaetan Harter <gaetan.harter@opensynergy.com>
> ---
>  virtio-crypto.tex | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

Thanks, pushed as an editorial update.


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