Re: [Documentation][RFC 2/3] RN: Update BSP scope to point external links and Freescale RN

[Mario Domenech Goulart <mario@ossystems.com.br>]

Hi Daiane,

On Wed, 11 Jun 2014 14:38:17 -0300 Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com> wrote:

> The Release Notes for the kernel is out of scope of this RN.
>
> Please, help me to add the better pointer for release notes
> out of scope of FSL Community BSP but important for
> development, such as kernel release notes for linux providers
> others that linux-imx.
>
> Signed-off-by: Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com>
> ---
>  release-notes/source/bsp-scope.rst | 31 +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--
>  1 file changed, 29 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/release-notes/source/bsp-scope.rst b/release-notes/source/bsp-scope.rst
> index 5035403..f036310 100644
> --- a/release-notes/source/bsp-scope.rst
> +++ b/release-notes/source/bsp-scope.rst
> @@ -1,7 +1,34 @@
> -BSP Scope
> +Scope
>  =========
>  
> -The scope of this release includes both meta-fsl-arm and meta-fsl-arm-extra.
> +FSL Community BSP Scope
> +---------
> +The scope of this Release Notes includes the FSL Community BSP meta layers:

s/Release Notes/Release Notes document/

> +
> + * `meta-fsl-arm <http://git.yoctoproject.org/cgit/cgit.cgi/meta-fsl-arm/?h=daisy>`_:
> +   provides the base support and Freescale ARM reference boards;
> + * `meta-fsl-arm-extra <https://github.com/Freescale/meta-fsl-arm-extra/tree/daisy>`_:
> +   provides support for 3rd party and partner boards;
> + * `meta-fsl-demos <https://github.com/Freescale/meta-fsl-demos/tree/daisy>`_:
> +   provides images recipes, demo recipes, and packagegroups used to easy the development with Yocto Project.

s/easy/ease/

> + * `Documentation <https://github.com/Freescale/Documentation>`_
> +   provides the source code for FSL Community BSP Release Notes (RN), User Guide (UG) and
> +   Frequentely Asked Question (FAQ)

s/Frequentely/Frequently/
s/Question/Questions/

> +
> +Kernel Release Notes
> +--------------------
> +
> +The FSL Community BSP include support for several kernel providers

s/include/includes/

> , each machine
> +may have a different Linux Kernel provider.

I'd finish the previous sentence and start a new one: ". Each machine
may have a different Linux Kernel provider."

> +
> +For the provider **linux-imx**, Freescale has a Release Notes for each version released,

s/Release Notes/Release Notes document/

> +this document has a list of known issues, new features, list of kernel arguments, and the
> +linux-imx kernel scope for each Freescale Reference Board.
> +
> +See the respective Linux Kernel provider for your machine in section :ref:`linux-providers`
> +
> +Supported Board List
> +--------------------
>  Please, see in next table the complete supported board list.

Not part of the diff, but while I'm here, I suggest

  Please, see the next table for the complete list of supported boards.


Best wishes.
Mario
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