Re: [Documentation][RFC 3/3] RN: Add the Release Schedule section

[Mario Domenech Goulart <mario@ossystems.com.br>]

Hi Daiane,

On Wed, 11 Jun 2014 14:38:18 -0300 Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com> wrote:

> Say it is based on Yocto Project.
>
> Please comment on how to point to YP URL.
>
> Signed-off-by: Daiane Angolini <daiane.angolini@freescale.com>
> ---
>  release-notes/source/introduction.rst | 10 ++++++++++
>  1 file changed, 10 insertions(+)
>
> diff --git a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> index a81fc7d..68015aa 100644
> --- a/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> +++ b/release-notes/source/introduction.rst
> @@ -4,3 +4,13 @@ Introduction
>  This document has the release notes of the FSL Community BSP |release|
>  which is a communty effort to improve Freescale's
>  processors support in OpenEmbedded and in the Yocto Project.
> +
> +Release Schedule
> +----------------
> +
> +The FSL Communtiy BSP follows the same release schedule from Yocto Project.

I suggest

  The FSL Community BSP follows the same release schedule as
  the Yocto Project's.

If you don't agree with the suggestion, please, note the
s/Communtiy/Community/ typo fix.

> +Since Yocto Project release 1.3 (denzil) meta-fsl-arm, meta-fsl-demos and meta-fsl-arm-extra
> +follow the same *release schedule* and the same *branch naming* from Yocto Project.

s/Yocto Project/the Yocto Project/

> +
> +See the `Yocto Projec Release <https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases>`_, for details
> +on the Yocto Project.

I suggest 

  See the `Yocto Project Releases <https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases>`_ document
  for details on the Yocto Project.

(note s/Projec Release/Project Releases/)

I don't know what the `_' character is for in that sentence. I assume it
is a rst syntax, so I've kept it.  If it is noise, please consider
removing it.

Mario
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