From: David Vernet <void@manifault.com>
To: Dave Thaler <dthaler1968=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Cc: bpf@vger.kernel.org, bpf@ietf.org, Dave Thaler <dthaler1968@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [Bpf] [PATCH bpf-next] bpf, docs: Fix typos in instruction-set.rst
Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2024 12:04:48 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240221180448.GC57258@maniforge> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240221173535.16601-1-dthaler1968@gmail.com>
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On Wed, Feb 21, 2024 at 09:35:35AM -0800, Dave Thaler wrote:
> * "BPF ADD" should be "BPF_ADD".
> * "src" should be "src_reg" in several places. The latter is the field name
> in the instruction. The former refers to the value of the register, or the
> immediate.
> * Add '' around field names in one sentence, for consistency with the rest
> of the document.
>
> Signed-off-by: Dave Thaler <dthaler1968@gmail.com>
Thanks for the cleanup.
Acked-by: David Vernet <void@manifault.com>
> ---
> .../bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst | 72 +++++++++----------
> 1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst b/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> index 868d9f617..56b5e7dad 100644
> --- a/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Unused fields shall be cleared to zero.
> As discussed below in `64-bit immediate instructions`_, a 64-bit immediate
> instruction uses two 32-bit immediate values that are constructed as follows.
> The 64 bits following the basic instruction contain a pseudo instruction
> -using the same format but with opcode, dst_reg, src_reg, and offset all set to zero,
> +using the same format but with 'opcode', 'dst_reg', 'src_reg', and 'offset' all set to zero,
> and imm containing the high 32 bits of the immediate value.
nit: Can we make sure these columns are all wrapped to 80 characters?
This can be done in a follow-up for the whole document later.
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From: David Vernet <void@manifault.com>
To: Dave Thaler <dthaler1968=40googlemail.com@dmarc.ietf.org>
Cc: bpf@vger.kernel.org, bpf@ietf.org, Dave Thaler <dthaler1968@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: [Bpf] [PATCH bpf-next] bpf, docs: Fix typos in instruction-set.rst
Date: Wed, 21 Feb 2024 12:04:48 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20240221180448.GC57258@maniforge> (raw)
Message-ID: <20240221180448.wrhySUh9DYFZXpXrXK_YX4HkfU-msxPj7lPoWoc-Eu8@z> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <20240221173535.16601-1-dthaler1968@gmail.com>
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On Wed, Feb 21, 2024 at 09:35:35AM -0800, Dave Thaler wrote:
> * "BPF ADD" should be "BPF_ADD".
> * "src" should be "src_reg" in several places. The latter is the field name
> in the instruction. The former refers to the value of the register, or the
> immediate.
> * Add '' around field names in one sentence, for consistency with the rest
> of the document.
>
> Signed-off-by: Dave Thaler <dthaler1968@gmail.com>
Thanks for the cleanup.
Acked-by: David Vernet <void@manifault.com>
> ---
> .../bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst | 72 +++++++++----------
> 1 file changed, 36 insertions(+), 36 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst b/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> index 868d9f617..56b5e7dad 100644
> --- a/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/bpf/standardization/instruction-set.rst
> @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ Unused fields shall be cleared to zero.
> As discussed below in `64-bit immediate instructions`_, a 64-bit immediate
> instruction uses two 32-bit immediate values that are constructed as follows.
> The 64 bits following the basic instruction contain a pseudo instruction
> -using the same format but with opcode, dst_reg, src_reg, and offset all set to zero,
> +using the same format but with 'opcode', 'dst_reg', 'src_reg', and 'offset' all set to zero,
> and imm containing the high 32 bits of the immediate value.
nit: Can we make sure these columns are all wrapped to 80 characters?
This can be done in a follow-up for the whole document later.
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2024-02-21 17:35 [PATCH bpf-next] bpf, docs: Fix typos in instruction-set.rst Dave Thaler
2024-02-21 17:35 ` [Bpf] " Dave Thaler
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