[Buildroot] Buildroot at ELC: review/suggestions needed

[Thomas Petazzoni <thomas.petazzoni@free-electrons.com>]

Dear Will Moore,

On Thu, 14 Feb 2013 09:53:38 -0000, Will Moore wrote:

> > The current state of the slides is visible at
> > http://free-electrons.com/~thomas/pub/buildroot-slides.pdf.
> > 
> > The two slides about build time and system size are still empty, I'm
> > currently making the experiments to get the numbers.
> 
> Looks good, some small suggestions that might improve them:
> 
> Slide 3/11 replace "product makers" with "product manufacturers"?
> Slide 6/11 replace "Allows to significantly improve Buildroot
> quality, by" with "Allows significant improvement of Buildroot
> quality by"? Slide 7/11 I appreciate this is a list of packages but
> is it clear that Buildroot can build you a toolchain?  I might also
> expect to see bootloaders, Linux, busybox earlier in the list as the
> starting point of almost all Buildroot usage with the more important
> packages later in the list, but I appreciate what is "important" is
> personal... Slide 8/11 replace "weights about" with "weighs in at
> approximately". Slide 11/11 it might be better to show a more
> interesting page of the user manual.

Thanks, slides updated to take into account your comments!

Thomas
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