[PATCH] Documentation: bug-hunting.rst: fix grammar

[PATCH] Documentation: bug-hunting.rst: fix grammar

[Manuel Ebner]

Fix two grammar issues to improve readability

Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebner@mailbox.org>
---
 Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
index 3901b43c96df..a74ffe2d8951 100644
--- a/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
+++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
@@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ Documentation/admin-guide/tainted-kernels.rst, "being loaded" is
 annotated with "+", and "being unloaded" is annotated with "-".
 
 
-Where is the Oops message is located?
--------------------------------------
+Where is the Oops message located?
+----------------------------------
 
 Normally the Oops text is read from the kernel buffers by klogd and
 handed to ``syslogd`` which writes it to a syslog file, typically
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ handed to ``syslogd`` which writes it to a syslog file, typically
 systemd, it may also be stored by the ``journald`` daemon, and accessed
 by running ``journalctl`` command.
 
-Sometimes ``klogd`` dies, in which case you can run ``dmesg > file`` to
+Sometimes ``klogd`` dies. In that case you can run ``dmesg > file`` to
 read the data from the kernel buffers and save it.  Or you can
 ``cat /proc/kmsg > file``, however you have to break in to stop the transfer,
 since ``kmsg`` is a "never ending file".
-- 
2.54.0

Re: [PATCH] Documentation: bug-hunting.rst: fix grammar

[Jonathan Corbet]

Manuel Ebner <manuelebner@mailbox.org> writes:

> Fix two grammar issues to improve readability
>
> Signed-off-by: Manuel Ebner <manuelebner@mailbox.org>
> ---
>  Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst | 6 +++---
>  1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)
>
> diff --git a/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst b/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
> index 3901b43c96df..a74ffe2d8951 100644
> --- a/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
> +++ b/Documentation/admin-guide/bug-hunting.rst
> @@ -63,8 +63,8 @@ Documentation/admin-guide/tainted-kernels.rst, "being loaded" is
>  annotated with "+", and "being unloaded" is annotated with "-".
>  
>  
> -Where is the Oops message is located?
> --------------------------------------
> +Where is the Oops message located?
> +----------------------------------

This is fine

>  Normally the Oops text is read from the kernel buffers by klogd and
>  handed to ``syslogd`` which writes it to a syslog file, typically
> @@ -72,7 +72,7 @@ handed to ``syslogd`` which writes it to a syslog file, typically
>  systemd, it may also be stored by the ``journald`` daemon, and accessed
>  by running ``journalctl`` command.
>  
> -Sometimes ``klogd`` dies, in which case you can run ``dmesg > file`` to
> +Sometimes ``klogd`` dies. In that case you can run ``dmesg > file`` to

This really just seems like churn?

Thanks,

jon