From: Michael Witten <mfwitten@gmail.com>
To: linux-hotplug@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PULL] Docs: README: Copyediting
Date: Fri, 15 Apr 2011 17:40:53 +0000 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <5894efb2-c7f1-4359-bb5a-3bdee4370b89-mfwitten@gmail.com> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <6169a635-4560-4e13-822f-a815cc6e7a4c-mfwitten@gmail.com>
On Mon, 11 Apr 2011 06:22:57 +0000, Michael Witten wrote:
> I did some copyediting whilst looking through the README;
> this email contains a pull request as well as the inlined
> diff of all the changes squashed together.
>
> The changes apply cleanly to 960250952193db522b8ced336bf998bd7e8e4a31:
>
> selinux: firmware - do not label files in runtime dir (2011-04-08 03:08:16 +0200)
>
> and are available here:
>
> git://github.com/mfwitten/udev.git docs/README
>
> Squash them if desired.
>
> Docs: README: `to replace' -> `replacing'
> Docs: README: `,' -> `;'
> Docs: README: Clean up a sentence
> Docs: README: Use present tense
> Docs: README: Add missing `and'
> Docs: README: Remove commas and use subjective mood
> Docs: README: Clean up `udev extras' requirements
> Docs: README: Clarify configuration of existing devices
> Docs: README: `does never apply' -> `never applies'
> Docs: README: Flip sentence structure to improve wording
> Docs: README: `set up' is the verb; `setup' is a noun
> Docs: README: Add a comma to offset the modifier
>
> README | 44 ++++++++++++++++++++++----------------------
> 1 files changed, 22 insertions(+), 22 deletions(-)
>
> [diff]
Would someone like to commit this?
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2011-04-11 6:22 [PULL] Docs: README: Copyediting Michael Witten
2011-04-15 17:40 ` Michael Witten [this message]
2011-04-18 3:11 ` Kay Sievers
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