From: "G. Branden Robinson" <g.branden.robinson@gmail.com>
To: Alejandro Colomar <alx.manpages@gmail.com>
Cc: linux-man@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH v4 08/10] intro.3: wfix
Date: Sat, 7 Jan 2023 10:45:42 -0600 [thread overview]
Message-ID: <20230107164542.gnrk6t73vfz7fqps@illithid> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <7516714b-7f8e-b6b1-b44a-f114b78ac973@gmail.com>
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Hi ALex,
At 2023-01-07T13:57:36+0100, Alejandro Colomar wrote:
> > On 1/7/23 10:55, G. Branden Robinson wrote:
> > > * Tighten cross reference. It wastes words to tell people to look
> > > elsewhere "for further information". Why else would they look there?
> > > * Use passive voice less.
> > > * Relocate sentence for more coherent discussion.
> > > * Say "application _programming_ interface".
>
> Hmm, after reconsideration, I've dropped the patch. I'm not sure about it.
What is causing you concern?
Regards,
Branden
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next prev parent reply other threads:[~2023-01-07 16:45 UTC|newest]
Thread overview: 8+ messages / expand[flat|nested] mbox.gz Atom feed top
2023-01-07 9:55 [PATCH v4 08/10] intro.3: wfix G. Branden Robinson
2023-01-07 12:45 ` Alejandro Colomar
2023-01-07 12:57 ` Alejandro Colomar
2023-01-07 16:45 ` G. Branden Robinson [this message]
2023-01-07 16:20 ` G. Branden Robinson
2023-01-07 19:47 ` Alejandro Colomar
2023-01-08 23:08 ` G. Branden Robinson
2023-01-09 12:14 ` Alejandro Colomar
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