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From: Matthew Wilcox <willy@infradead.org>
To: Randy Dunlap <rdunlap@infradead.org>
Cc: attreyee-muk <tintinm2017@gmail.com>,
	jpoimboe@kernel.org, jikos@kernel.org, mbenes@suse.cz,
	pmladek@suse.com, joe.lawrence@redhat.com, corbet@lwn.net,
	live-patching@vger.kernel.org, linux-doc@vger.kernel.org,
	linux-kernel@vger.kernel.org
Subject: Re: [PATCH] Took care of some grammatical mistakes
Date: Tue, 28 Nov 2023 14:12:52 +0000	[thread overview]
Message-ID: <ZWX1ZB5p5Vhz7WD2@casper.infradead.org> (raw)
In-Reply-To: <202dbdf5-1adf-4ffa-a50d-0424967286ba@infradead.org>

On Mon, Nov 27, 2023 at 11:41:31AM -0800, Randy Dunlap wrote:
> Hi,
> 
> On 11/27/23 07:57, attreyee-muk wrote:
> > Respected Maintainers, 
> > 
> > I have made some grammatical changes in the livepatch.rst file where I
> > felt that the sentence would have sounded more correct and would have become easy for
> > beginners to understand by reading. 
> > Requesting review of my proposed changes from the mainatiners. 
> > 
> > Thank You
> > Attreyee Mukherjee
> > 
> > Signed-off-by: attreyee-muk <tintinm2017@gmail.com>
> > ---
> >  Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst | 8 ++++----
> >  1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
> > 
> > diff --git a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst b/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst
> > index 68e3651e8af9..a2d2317b7d6b 100644
> > --- a/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst
> > +++ b/Documentation/livepatch/livepatch.rst
> > @@ -35,11 +35,11 @@ and livepatching:
> >  
> >  All three approaches need to modify the existing code at runtime. Therefore
> > -they need to be aware of each other and not step over each other's toes.
> > +they need to be aware of each other and not step over each others' toes.
> 
> I've never seen that written like that, so I disagree here. FWIW.

"Step over" is new to me too.  I see "step on" much more often.
As far as placement of the apostrophe,
https://ludwig.guru/s/step+on+each+others+toes
suggests either omitting the apostrophe or placing it after the s,
as attreyee-muk has done is most common.


  reply	other threads:[~2023-11-28 14:13 UTC|newest]

Thread overview: 8+ messages / expand[flat|nested]  mbox.gz  Atom feed  top
2023-11-27 15:57 [PATCH] Took care of some grammatical mistakes attreyee-muk
2023-11-27 16:47 ` Jonathan Corbet
2023-11-27 19:41 ` Randy Dunlap
2023-11-28 14:12   ` Matthew Wilcox [this message]
2023-11-28 16:18     ` Randy Dunlap
2023-11-29 10:08       ` Miroslav Benes
2023-11-29 12:47         ` Bagas Sanjaya
2023-11-29 14:48         ` Joe Lawrence

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